All Comments on 'How Had It Come To This?'

The writing style stinks, the frequent and over use of "word... word" kills the story fast. Learn how to write without this.

Those are called "Quotation Marks" and are used to identify actual dialog as opposed to the story writing. I think you'd better stick to watching porno, its a lot less challenging.

Please continue your story. It is well written and anyone on this site with intellegence appreciates your effort.

It was entertaining, and you could imagine it. So good job!

Thanks for writing!

Please continue writing here. I love the structure, even the humor. Very sexy viewpoint. I hope this is a good start for your new erotic life.

Loved every wicked word. Nicely done.

. . . so those of you who did not enjoy it, why don't you just slink away!

I enjoyed the story very much. The feeling that somehow there is fact behind this story made it very erotic to read,

Such a hot, hot story, and I love the ending. More please!

brilliant story awesome writing. reading tis was likw watch it taking place.

love the story so much and the very exceting writing. more of this story would be good.

i hate stories where two siblings screw and leave the others out afraid they would be against it. then after years work them in and when the left out one finds out it has gone on for years they aren't shocked or mad as hell so unrealistic. any one that finds out there siblings are screwing and didn't ask them to join or atleast give them the chance to say no years ago would be pissed as hell and not want anything to do with them ever again keep it atleast sounding realistic suze was betrayed and ignored for years and would be mad as hell and tell rhem to go to hell she sure wouldn't join them or invite them to her wedding total waste of time

I don't really understand why Suze is getting married, or why Jeff and Mel fuck around with others. It seems they could have all they need with each other. Maybe they're only together for the kink value of incest. Nothing wrong with that, but stories about people using other people doesn't do much for me.

I usually adore bro/sis stories, but I didn't find this one all that hot or interesting. The 'Sabrina and Her Brother' series is MUCH better, even though it also has the husband/others issue I can't make sense of.

CHAPTER TWO CONSIST OF A PAT THAT MEL TWO WILL BE WED WITH HIS SPUNK IN HER AND THEIR FIRST CHILD WILL BE HIS

Great story ! And had me pleasuring myself...

It should be very interesting when she's married and still 'incesting' !!

If you are such an expert on sibling incest why don't you write something better?

First the narrator's a voyeur, then ends up in group sex scene. The brother's dominant and yet artful. Susan really did a great job of keeping up the the tension and continually mixing the reader's frames of reference. Smoking hot story.

Well Susan I appreciate your stories very much they turn me on pretty good. Wish you Authors would put pictues in your biograpy would be great to be able to fantasize about you while reading your very good stories.

Well !!!!! I think JEFF was just a gash hound, and would fuck

a tree if he could find a knot hole. But both his sisters and

there friends, and even his sister the night before she gets

married.

THANKS

Lovely sexy story. There is a ring of truth in it. Well written and presented. I have had a little experience of incest with a only one family relation,,,thanks

Really lovely story and so well written

We loved your little tale. My wife and I enjoy reading stories our loud where the listener acts out the actions of the characters. Whilst we both view the actions in the large mirror next to our bed. Until the actions overcome the narrative.