All Comments on 'How Hannah and I Got Together'

Your story is fairly well-written but it's in the wrong category. I kept on reading, expecting that actual sex would occur at some point, but it never happened. Should be in either the Exhibition/Voyeur or Toys/Masturbation category.

Thank you for sharing this story it was absolutly wonderful. Very enjoyable reading can't wait for the next part.

Please don't wait a year as some do to finish the next chapter(s).... I can see all sorts of possibilities. Good Job

Really enjoyed the story. Can't wait for the next part.

Your story should be in masturbation I reckon but it was still an amazing story and would love to see where it goes from here.

It feels like it needs a sequel.

This is awesome and I would love to see where it goes from here

Please?

I sincerely hope you are finishing this story...soon...very very soon.

An unbelievably great tease~

I was loving your story and then it ended just like that... needs an additional chapter to get these two together.... other than that it was a good teaser story.....

Was very well written. Loved the story (both parts) Though it ended very quickly... Would have loved to read more

All on its own

Nice premise.

Nicely told.

Just a beginning, but sets the stage well for what's going to follow.

But...

He didn't have the time to masturbate while in college? Huh?

He normally masturbates multiple times a day, but not in college? Huh?

You wrote: "...Hannah had off course..." You meant OF, not OFF.

I really don't understand her insistance that he masturbate on his knees on the floor. Huh?

I also don't understand why she didn't have him cum into something -- a handkerchief, a pair of her panties, a towel, her bra, some receptacle.

Nevertheless, five stars.

Great build up! Very well thought out and written. I definitely look forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

One of the hottest stories I've ever read!

I want to cum on Hannah's bare feet too.

Great start..more please!