All Comments on 'How I Became a CD SLUT Cum Junky Ch. 02'

While there are a few small errors, no big deal... The story is HOT! I look forward to future installments.

Thid tall leggy blonde gurl would love hanging out with you one night

I didn't realize what category this story was in or I probably wouldn't have started it. But I'm glad I did. You are writing a very sexual story that really fits many catalogues and may get lost in this one. Anyway I will keep reading, regardless of the category The story stands on its own....it's great.

This is a great story. Well planned, written with care. Great descriptions of dressing up are intertwined with quick moving action. I'd love to get a chance to read the third chapter. When is it coming? Love

This is not just a horny as hell story but like... An instruction manual on pre-gangfvck party etiquette!! Amaaazing. I'm SO hard and horny after this. Thank you so much sweetness. Xxx.

give us more

Very hot.. please continue..

Fantastically written, i can't wait for the next chapter in this series.

Oh, you slut, come out of retirement and do up the motel scene. I could read your shit all day, every day!

You made several errors in spelling, the most egregious being "shinny" instead of "shiny" and it was used far too often. There were many grammatical mistakes, most often in failure to have subject/verb agreement in sentences.

Other than those annoyances, however, the story was pretty good. Gangbang by BBC is always good fodder for a tranny story.

I loved your CD shut story I was actually there. You know i wasn't but you know what i mean. I loved the gang bang element.

Taught means teaching in the past. Example: "I taught math last semester."

When something is pulled tight it's spelled taut: "Her dress was taut across her ass."

Sorry but you use it occasionally and it bothers me. I like your stories or I would just read something else.