All Comments on 'How I Became a Real Woman'

You write some of the best lesbian stories on this site, I am dying (figuratively) to read more!

Oh, in case you care for more detailed feedback, I do not entirely like female/female stories centered around, and ultimately culminating in, penetration. I believe if one only wants penetration, just read straight stuff instead! Oral sex and tribbing are what lesbian lovers excel at, and are criminally underrepresented; I love that you are going against that trend.

Great story, please don't stop now.

more please, you can't leave us hanging like this, not very many authors story's rate a 5 stars in my book, but this was so good I would have given it more than 5 if I could

thank you for the story so far

please write so much more

very interested in this beautiful love story

and make it hot and steamy with a lot of love passion and sensuality

AWESOME Story, DON'T STOP!!!

Yes please continue! Why settle for a four inch pee pee when a delectable pussy is so much better.

I'd love to read a continuition of this.

Looking forward to the next installment....

Please complete this story

Wow..how hot!!!! Please continue with this story

More please........

Definitely continue the story please.

If you are going to be a condescending child you should just move along. It takes more testicular fortitude than you might imagine to put a story out into an open forum for people to judge. This story is more than adequate. The autor's seeming insecurities in asking about interest eludes to a great regard for the reader. Thank you for a wonderful story and I would very much like to read more.

Oh yes, more please.

People are begging for more, so let's just stop right here. Leave them wanting more and write something else.

Your ability to capture your feelings with another woman for the first time is exactly the way that I felt as well for my first time..all be it not in as beautiful of a setting as Hawaii. I cannot wait to read the rest!!

I HOPE FOR THE SAKE OF ALL OF YOUR READERS EXCLUDING THE ANONYMOUS WRITER GARBAGE, THAT YOU WILL RELEASE CHAPTER#2. VERY SOON BECAUSE I FOR ONE AM VERY EXCITED TO READ THE REST OF THE STORY.

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 dozen roses. &5🌟's

I had a hard time getting through this story as referring to H'S member as "pee pee" makes this sound like a 1st grader wrote it. That, plus the fact that Pam was nicknamed "pp" throughout...

I hate all these stupid sexist mysoginistic BDSM male sicko fantasies masquerading as Lesbian stories. What I love about your stories is that they show Women loving and eating each other out, and turning their backs on idiot guys. All Women should become Lesbians and milk worthy guys for sperm, freeze it and then wipe them out and scream "Girl Power!" and have a huge Lesbian orgy to celebrate. I'm waiting for the revolution. I like my brothers and a few other guys, but when the revolution starts, those Bitches are fucked!

This is hot but sadly spoiled by the use of PP and H it made the reading difficult and so distracted from the story.

Regardless I hope you continue because your story has just begun. What happened to the honeymoon and where did PP and Jasmine go to finally get together? Five stars

Oh my, dat might hv been de most awesome day n ur lyf. U knw most of de tymz i read these storie and wonder f one day smthng real will eva happen n ma lyf coz am alwayz afraid to make the first move for i fear i may end up offend ing ha en losing evn de some thng (friend ship) we have. How can i eva manage to live wzout ha?? So all i gat to do z pretend lyk only our friend ship matter but deep inside i wonder f she also thinks de way i do coz i really want her but i dont knw wat ti do. Anyway dis really z a nice story, so plzz go on

I loved this story the love being felt between them the build up can't wait to read more!

Can't wait to read part 2! Thanks for sharing this with us.

Anxious for the next chapter

I enjoyed this story very much can't wait for more

Just because you would act differently in the situation these characters are in doesn't mean the characters should act differently too. They've lived different lives from yours, and you have to respect that instead of bashing on the author for a full paragraph. If the author is reading this, then you don't have to worry; your story is great and was written beautifully!

Well written I could feel the passion

I'd very much like the sequel soon. Please do write it and post it, this tale, while dark, as it depicts adultery- Pam's hitting on somebody else's wife- is a tale that's truly brilliant and one interesting story... you did an excellent job of it, I think.

Sincerely eager for more;

Nurek.

this is one hot story, it is so well written with excellent story-line.

2nd time reading this story and I'm still am overwhelmed with lesbian love. I love this story and thank you.

This is GREAT! Part 2 please.