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Only_connectOnly_connectover 3 years ago

The ending seemed strange to me, sort of anticlimactic.

But overall, a very interesting story, nice action, some rather teasing moments when hot girls were ready for it but the action never happened... but when there was sex, it was really good.

Nice one.

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Happily married straight male who loves the outdoors, gardening, photography, and staying fit. I tend to write when the weather is abysmal, and I don't want to go outside. I have a few stories in the works, but it may be a while before I finish them enough to publish. I wri...

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