by latin_lover
It was pretty good all up, but the 'pappi' and 'mammi' thing was totally gross, as was the use of the word bowels. we all know where the ass is, don't need to highlight it more (and i love anal sex, both reading and getting it, so don't think that's what's stopping me). The word threw me when the rest was flowing along very well...
the kissing at the start was super hot.
I enjoyed the one liner at the end. Also thought the papi/mami thing was quite endearing and I am looking forward to the rest of the story. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC