All Comments on 'How I Met My Wife Ch. 01'

I really enjoyed your story. The premise is a bit hackneyed, but you built it well, and it had the immediacy of that strange attraction that can happen to someone when they meet that special someone, who makes them complete. Thanks, and hope this will lead to more.

Whores have pimps.

They don't want their "property" escaping...

so?

This was a good romance, there are some who sometimes want more details but that's the variety of people on here.

Thank you

It is a novel that is heartbreaking. But how does the couple overcome the problems thereafter?

As she mentioned, her Clients may recognise her when she is his wife?

Bests, Joesch

WhY happens next

Hope there will be another chapter. Or two. It will be interesting to see how the inevitable meeting with a former client is handled. Plus I wonder if her "employers" will let her walk away with no consequences.

Grammar, spelling, sentence structure and syntax are dreadful. Story 5*, grammar, etc. 1*. Do you speak English as second language? If so errors are forgivable but still need an editor,

I can’t get over anyone leaving a six year old child alone.