All Comments on 'How I Spent My Summer Vacation'

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Robyn1859Robyn1859over 6 years ago
Beautiful story

Romantic in every way,,, a sad happy story that leaves you feeling great

NAVDOC73NAVDOC73over 6 years ago
Fucking Allergies

Excellent story but my fucking allergies really started acting up when he told her that his anniversary was the bext day. I am not usually so allergic to stories here but man my eyes started watering up so suddenly. Great work.

lonelyhdlonelyhdover 6 years ago
Very good

A touch overly mushy at times, but I still enjoyed it. Should have been in the romance category and could use a little more editing, but again, good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Awesome

The Best Story this year on Literotic. It is how men should treat a ladies. Also my Wife and I Been together for 31 years and she had Cancer also Great Story thanks Gory

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
HISMSV

Touching.

I had some thoughts about Katie and unconditional friendship. I think they remain valid.

This is a well written story. I found it slow in the beginning and the pace never really changed, but this story isn't all about getting after it. It was entertaining, and as NAVDoc suggests, a bit of a tear-jerker.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Awesome story!!!!

Very well written....smooth style......and yep.....started to tear up a couple of times. A continuation perhaps????

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ok but now.....

Now that all the mushy stuff is out of the way, maybe we have a chance to salvage this in part two. I suggest a bit threesome with Katie. Then maybe she moves in and gets pregnant by Steve as well. There you go. You're welcome for the plot outline.

Oldergenteman69Oldergenteman69over 6 years ago
Wow!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. I really was hoping there was no ending. You have a gift and a skill that is amazing. You are a great story teller! Thanks so much for sharing it!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 6 years ago

Loved this story. It was very sweet and romantic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Laugh cry and fuck

These are the things reading this made me do and want!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ok, but

The story line was ok, the dialogue mostly good, but the erotica part was weak. Not here for literature, here for well written sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Really enjoyed it.

I am not normally a romantic kind of person, as this touched my soul deeply. A well written romantic love story, with just the right amount erotica. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Fantastic

At times I was in floods of tears. Wow, what an ending or was it a beginning? I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story.

Blue90aBlue90aover 6 years ago
Very well written

I really enjoyed reading this story. It was well written and moved along well. The characters were sufficiently developed and the ending was uplifting. Great story, thank you.

HemmingswayHemmingswayover 3 years ago
Nice

Enjoyable story with a strong final punctuation mark. The revelation by the two mains to their work colleagues in the second to last paragraph was clever.

Well crafted and well done

RetiredsleeveRetiredsleeveabout 3 years ago

I dont normally like to compare authors on this site, because each author brings a unique quality to their work, but this story, as well

As another romance from this author, is reminiscent to another romance author here i owns as Komrad1156.

I really enjoyed your story as much as Komrads.

RanDog025RanDog025over 1 year ago

I almost passed on this jewel of a story. It was an excellent story, WOW! 5BIG ASS FUCKING FLAMING NOVA STARS! And of course a great big thank you too!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Stephanie being an interfering bitch!!

5* great story!!

There should have been some karma on the cheaters

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Katie back in their lives after being so devious- hell NO!!!

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