by mabsls
Romantic in every way,,, a sad happy story that leaves you feeling great
Excellent story but my fucking allergies really started acting up when he told her that his anniversary was the bext day. I am not usually so allergic to stories here but man my eyes started watering up so suddenly. Great work.
A touch overly mushy at times, but I still enjoyed it. Should have been in the romance category and could use a little more editing, but again, good story
The Best Story this year on Literotic. It is how men should treat a ladies. Also my Wife and I Been together for 31 years and she had Cancer also Great Story thanks Gory
Touching.
I had some thoughts about Katie and unconditional friendship. I think they remain valid.
This is a well written story. I found it slow in the beginning and the pace never really changed, but this story isn't all about getting after it. It was entertaining, and as NAVDoc suggests, a bit of a tear-jerker.
Very well written....smooth style......and yep.....started to tear up a couple of times. A continuation perhaps????
Now that all the mushy stuff is out of the way, maybe we have a chance to salvage this in part two. I suggest a bit threesome with Katie. Then maybe she moves in and gets pregnant by Steve as well. There you go. You're welcome for the plot outline.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. I really was hoping there was no ending. You have a gift and a skill that is amazing. You are a great story teller! Thanks so much for sharing it!
The story line was ok, the dialogue mostly good, but the erotica part was weak. Not here for literature, here for well written sex.
I am not normally a romantic kind of person, as this touched my soul deeply. A well written romantic love story, with just the right amount erotica. Well done
At times I was in floods of tears. Wow, what an ending or was it a beginning? I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story.
I really enjoyed reading this story. It was well written and moved along well. The characters were sufficiently developed and the ending was uplifting. Great story, thank you.
Enjoyable story with a strong final punctuation mark. The revelation by the two mains to their work colleagues in the second to last paragraph was clever.
Well crafted and well done
I dont normally like to compare authors on this site, because each author brings a unique quality to their work, but this story, as well
As another romance from this author, is reminiscent to another romance author here i owns as Komrad1156.
I really enjoyed your story as much as Komrads.
I almost passed on this jewel of a story. It was an excellent story, WOW! 5BIG ASS FUCKING FLAMING NOVA STARS! And of course a great big thank you too!
Stephanie being an interfering bitch!!
5* great story!!
There should have been some karma on the cheaters