All Comments on 'How I won Back My Wife Ch. 06'

part of.

My respect level has dwindled even more.

Is Noel going to find both his balls. Will he break Derry? We will see in a few more chapters. Too easy by far on Kate.

You have killed this story big time only doing 1 page at a time this could have been a fantastic story but as always you put a knife in this story and sentence it to death why what on earth did you do it this could have been one of your greatest pieces of work and you have butchered it big style why if you had written this story properly this would of done 5 to 6 pages but now you have absolutely screwed up big style half of your story you keep repeating yourself so just either please end this story on your waste of time next chapter or just clearly pull this story and write it properly I don’t think you realise what damage you have done to this story

once again, I can see the revenge side but she married him, lied about the kid and you want to give her everything with our pause. Yeah, his a willing cuckold

Revenge is a dish best served cold. To the mother.

But the child was hurt by this divorce. These type of people never seem to care about the kids in their self centered lives.

Is increasing.. get out and don't come back. He and his new wife (the one he won back in the title) can always adopt Sarah when her biological mom and dad lose custody of her. When are we going to meet the new mrs?

Very good on the revenge part. I was pissed that he allowed his wife to cheat and that guy to abuse him . He did snap when it came to the long lie and secret which was good . I’m not sure about cutting out a child you raised as yours but I’d definitely sue the guy for money going back to the pregnancy until present time. It would definitely get ruled in his favor . Also look forward to reading how his X suffers more for the lie of the child than the whirring herself out. Looking forward to turning the tables on that dough bag with his wife and financially

Or a winner. The title will never be fulfilled. No one will win. Noel lost his manhood, his wife and his daughter. If he gets either or both back he is a loser.

If he goes with Bella he will lose. She is crazy weird.

If he hooks up with Cathy it is not a win. She is weak and still with cheating husband.

I feel like a loser for reading all chapters. Author started a bad plot and it just gets worse.

All of a sudden he grows a spine? Please don't continue. You're simply dragging this out for no reason. Insipid characters doing really stupid things.

1 star

Why didn’t this so called friend, spa tell him this sooner? He wouldn’t have even been following her bizarre plan and trying to get the wife back had she told him straight away. Did she not realise finding that out would have effected his decision. - she’s a nut too and not much of a friend.

HE IS THE FATHER!!! And to do such things to Sarah means he only is a selfcentered asshole.

On one time he is mulling about his loss(only his own fault) of daugther and the next i am free i can fuck how i want(Bella and Cathy maybe more) not believably.

Do yourself a favour and edit this story new and fill the holes. Sex without a meaning to the story is worthless. And now after 90 days suddenly he goes after Derrel?

Nomore interesting! You have to decide write a cuckstory or do it right and write a story to the headline.

Apparently you have never had a child, especially a little girl; no one who has raised a kid through the first couple months (not to mention years) could act as your MC did here.

On your next story try to stay consistent; a grade A wimp that you portrayed here cannot believably grow a pair in believable fiction, even if it might be possible in life. Readers just won’t believe it!

I seem to remember one reader saying he’d read this entire story on another site; is that possible? And if it is, why the crap didn’t you publish it here in no more than two installments. Dragging it out like this really destroyed the story, which is too bad, for this could have been ONE GREAT STORY.

Anyway, thanks for the read; I’m sure you’ll churn out some 5 star stories shortly. cd

You wrote lots of words previewing Bella's plan. But I wonder was it was.

It's your story and it's purely fiction. Write what you think and freely express what's on your mind. If your imagination is running wild, let it be, but never let negative comments ran you over. You may want to consider the valid points of their arguments but don't let it stop you from pursuing your ideas. They have all the rights to express their opinions as you have also the right to express yours. Freedom rules.

every single character here is a dumb piece of shit! bravo!

And worse.

Really sonderont how he will be back with his wife and child, I agree, while remaining globally positive, that this chapter is too fast.

Amazing chapter, keep them coming.

You created characters who are the most stupid ppl on earth.

Ridiculous!!!

Has been revised,I almost feel sorry for Kate and dear Derry.

What was Bella’s plan.? It seems like The Reader got tired of his cuckold story and decided to make a BTB story. But, a man sulking in his room for a year in self pity isn’t much of a victory. It could still be a reconciliation story but there are a lot of loose ends to clean up.