All Comments on 'How It All Started... Pt. 02'

Please don't stop it here

I think someone should call Social Services?

This story should be advanced forward

I like your style of writing but your stories are just too short. I guess I was hoping for a bit more action

Part 3!!! More handjobs!!!

when does start playing with his mom

They NEED to have sex. lol

starting good but so slow~!!!

Loved the story but wished it was longer and that he did more to his mom while she jerked him off and afterwards. Five stars and a favorite point!

Great so far! Looking forward to more!

Keeping it minimal in the act, hand job barely considered incrst - sex without penetration. Well paced and virtually free of grammer errors or POV. Excellent job, but I’m sure the perverts and LOB (Leacherous Old Bastard) 👐👐 want more. 😎 5*

This is great and . . . Time will out !

I rated it one star because I felt like this is the exact same story as the last one. Also I didn't like the first story. I didn't at all believe his mom was drunk. You kept saying it but she didn't act drunk. No slurring of speech. No flirtatious giggling. She was just there to say goodnight? That's an extremely lane reason a drunk person goes into her son's room late at night. Have you ever actually been drunk before? I'm going to guess no but the story does have merit. Its just a sheepishly slow unrealistically hammered start

More, more, more. Part 3 and 4 please.

There's a good deal of fun, exciting stuff and it's written well. Unfortunately, by the time a reader gets into the "part," it's coming to a close. You would have been better off combining the first two parts and giving the reader more to sink their teeth in.

So realistic and so similar to my mother and myself.

I loved the comment about giving one star due to not liking this piece, and that they didn't like the first one too. LOL Why take the effort to post stuff like that then? Too funny.

I've gotten a number of comments/messages about the shorts being too short. I don't have a lot of time to write but I have a story stuck in my head that needs to get out, so I figured working out a number of short writings was better than nothing at all.

Thanks for the comments, positive and negative.

Great I loved it. The same thing happened to me when I was about 14 I think, & it happened every night till I left home at 18, I still go to her house 1 or 2 times a week for a great hand job.

The writing supports suspension of disbelief with the lack of ridiculous sizes and other silly shit from other authors. Few editorial mistakes if at all in either part. I rated this one with another star as the build up is deserving of it. If my input matters, I think it might be time for a reciprocity of manual favors with mom. After all she has needs too. Which can lead to a relationship in earnest of mutual favors.