All Comments on 'How Long Could You Resist?'

Waiting for 2nd edition.... try using spell check this time tho.....

more, please.

cant wait till the 2nd part of this fab story

Well written and very enjoyable story! I couldn't stop reading! I don't look for or like stuff like this normally, but this I think was really good.

Very HOT. Can't wait to read part 2!

it got way to dumb when they were sitting on the couch talking. why would any guy just sit there putting up with the teasing most guys would have got up and either gone to thier room as soon as she started talking about sex or gone outside anything to get away from her. keep it atleast somewhat realistic this isn't the fantasy area so it has to be believable

DBRS

S.E A very good write. Don't be long with the rest of the saga.ciao.

Mother died when he was fifteen.

Mother took little sister to get birth control pills when she was sixteen.

Zombie?

Decent story, but perhaps a little more buildup would have been nice as well as fact checking.

I used to do my bro's ass all the time. If I had a sis, would do her 2.

Good story line to continue! can add up more chapters! Marvelous speed of story. GOOD WORK ! KEEP IT UP.

this was a hot story omg to fuck his sister ass

I don't see a plothole, I read a boy who was 15 when his mother died. I also find a girl whose mother arranged that WHEN the daughter was 16 she would get the pills

If sister was a year younger and mom died when he was 15, then sister would have been 14 when mom died. Sister couldn't have the birds and bees talk at age 16 with mom unless it was from the grave.

Good story, though. It didn't make a difference.

This was a very good story. As someone who grew up in the sixties and had an uncle who raised horses and cows, I was able to visualize the events as they unfolded. This, to me is the mark of a very good story. I can't wait to read more.

The mother merely told the doctor two years in advance. It was well written nonetheless.

Very good story, very well written. The mom told the doctor two years in advance. She didnt say she had the talk at sixteen, she said that she started the pill at sixteen. Read it right before you criticize. I didnt grow up on a farm but I could still picture everything as if I was right there. Thoroughly enjoyable.

Back in the 60's the drinking age was 18... But very nice story none the less

waiting for the blowjob and to see how long. it takes her to master the deep throat and swallow.

why is this listed as a two part series when there is no part two? time to delete your so called stories and stop writing until you can do it properly and completely.

Umm, why does he have to delete it, and do it again? Are you insane, he's obviously working on part 2. Just because part 2 isn't posted yet doesn't mean it won't ever be. Calm down and think.

I don't want to miss it.

I don't know what to say , funny, very very open, and so innocent .I never talked about stuff like he and she did to each other. that means they are really close to each others hearts

way to stupid and unrealistic and after three and a half years no chapter two even though this is listed as a two chapter series on your bio page. what a hack he never should have been allowed to post anything. the webmasters need to demand that nothing be posted until the entire story is written out in rough draft, that way readers don't get left hanging when hacks dissapear.

If you get writers block get one of the fem members

to join in and give some added input, she may trigger

a multiple for you...

Great story..

G

I don't usually give ratings but this story really came together for me. I'm ready for part two, or maybe more. We have to get into that pus.

I got a boner and ended up cumming in my own pants

I came 3x, whew! Please continue this!

This is really good. You dud great in picking a ranch as a backdrop. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I remember my past, growing up in the Sand Hills of Nebraska. Our closest family was about two miles away. Their oldest Daughter was two years younger than me. We had what you would say total love for each other. I can only dream of what would have taken place if I had stayed there. She was an angel and I loved her.

Thank you for taking my back to the late 1930s. FC

"Her nipples were taught . . .." Did you mean "taut" or were these some educated titties?

I anxiously await the next part!

Ok, that, was fucking awesome!! Enjoyably well written! ...at least I was so wrapped up in reading it that I didnt notice anything to complain about, hehehe. Oh! Except, wheres part two?! Give! Give! ;)

Thanks for writing!!

A great story with much more potential !! It's nice to see how Todd's sister brought him along and how much trust there is between them. Besides that, she has developed into a sexy, stacked sister who wants to explore sex with her brother !! Now that they have started having sex, they need to go to the next level having vagina sex and enjoying many other variations too. They can teach each other and keep it between them. It's nice to see how loving they are and open minded too !! Cannot wait for the next chapter(s) - Thank you.

your story again, still waiting for part two.

Good stuff mate, keep it up !

.........there isn't going to be a part 2, is there !

I know it was posted not long after the first part, but it seems to have been deleted, because I remember reading it.

Maybe you could write what you remember reading about part 2 then. It's been 7 years, sir_erotica is gone

Believable scenario, well thought out characters, and excellent sex scenes!!! A well made story among the increasingly flaccid offerings of late. Take a bow and cant wait to see the 2nd part.

Enjoyed the story. Looking forward to part 2.

Thanks

I enjoyed the story as the game played out. Just sorry that Fran had to take in the ass first instead of her "puss". I guess technically she's still a virgin because there never has been a chapter two. As for being degraded for not posting the second chapter, shit happens in life and things happen that prevent it being written. There's no need for anyone to get their panties in a wad, it seems to happen a lot in Literotica. At least Sir_Erotica wrote and posted chapter one. More than most readers will ever do.

Just the brother/sister interaction was enough to give this old guy a chub, I know TMI.

It would be nice if we got to see Todd go through the front door next time.

Great...... until the anal. Quit reading. No first time should be anal.

Good premise.

But the switch to anal sex hapened much too quickly. Why not some touching foreplay before that? Why not a little oral. One way or both ways.

The anal could have been a 'last resort' when the other actions didn't really solve the need to be fucked.

And what happened to Chapter 2? Ove a decade between chapters?

Four stars.

Very entertaining & sometimes funny, Since I never seemed to get much out of anal sex I've only tried it a few times

The one that disgusted me was when had a cock covered with shit. I gagged my gust out over that & vowed to never do that again. Another time she was in her period & my cock was covered with blood. Fortunately it didn't smell bad.

Not quite 5 stars but close...

Wish I had a sister that was into that....

Lucky lad....

Well that was a total waste of time especially when chapter two never eventuated.but there again chapter one was only passable anyway⭐️⭐️⭐️