by TheRedChamber
Wow, what a read! More twists & turns than a Texas back road. Keep up the great work
People are so quick to criticize. I like the ending you chose. It’s far from typical in this category, and doesn’t fit well in any of them, but it’s very well written. Thanks for sharing with us.
5*
Tc
Pamela was a narcissistic manipulative slut and a cunt.
Lisa was Pamela's pawn.
Roy was nothing but a human dildo.
Paul was a sucker.
Marcy was the hero.
Hopefully, the 'yellow pills' took care of Pamela and Lisa for good.
Here's to Paul, Maria, Samuel (Adam) and Paul's dad having a good life in Brazil.
Wow. I like that the son was actually revolted by and refuses the invitation to commit incest -- unusual in an erotic story of this type, and a much-overlooked, normal, and natural reaction. Good story, although I find the amount of damage the mother did to her son so far beyond the pale that I have trouble with the son not doing something far, far worse before disappearing. It is far beyond tolerable. I'm not a BTB kind-of guy at all, but... damn! I have trouble believing that a human could withstand that level of betrayal without some kind of reprisal rather than just taking his son and leaving. At the very least, giving his ex-fiancee something that would prevent the birth of another child with his ex-fiancee, like getting a number of morning-after pills down her throat as she was unconscious before leaving, leaving the mother and ex-fiancee with none of his children and no way to find him, and knowing that the reason is how they have behaved and the choices they have made.
Why doesn't he make the events public? There are a lot of reporters and shows just waiting for something like that. Mother steals son's fiancée who is pregnant. Marries her and lives a life with a lover. If I were him, I would make life for my mother and Lisa a living hell. And no matter where they go, the story would follow them. I would make sure of that.