by RalphyNJ
I loved the whole story Patrick and Colton meeting falling in love was so damn beautiful that i can't wait to read it again, i hope there will be more about these two, the story had me captivated from beginning to end and i am so sorry that it is over, can't wait to read more of your writing, Keep up the Great Work!!!!!
That was one of the one best (short) stories. I have ever read.!! How about making it longer. They met and loved each other. Why not make it last longer. They do have their whole (hole) life, ahead of them together. You have a very great start, of something that would be Awesome, to the future !!!
I for got to add my e-mail wdenny55@yahoo.com just in caseyou plan to add more to this story Please let me know. thank you.
And romantic. A great story, well written. Would love another instalment to see how Patrick and Colton fare a few years down the road. Excellent.
I love your story characters. The hero is always so mature, confident and patient. I wish I could find someone like that.
I don't know why everyone is fawning all over this story. Nothing new. Oft repeated premise. Same old descriptions of erotic acts. I was bored.
Nothing wrong with an oft repeated premise well told. Nothing new under the sun and all that. Also nothing wrong with some uncomplicated caring sex acts. Plenty of complicated and uncaring sex acts all over lit. . Keep 'em coming, Ralphy....
A great romantic read of two guys who fall in love gently but inevitably. Patrick behaves as a perfect gentleman and gets his reward with the adoration shown him by Colton. And what is best is that the concentration is on the story and the romance and the sex falls properly in that context rather than being the raison d'etre,
Many more such stories please
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I so enjoyed reading this story so much that i had to read it again, because it is just so beautiful and so well written, you just find yourself rooting for Patrick and Colton to get a HEA, i so hope that soon you will continue their story and i cannot wait to read more of your writing. I Thank You for showing me how beautiful True Love really is. Thanks:)
Well worth the read! Good characters and a plot, though altruistic, was really great following the progression of a relationship! Thanks!
Parts of the story was interesting and sweet others turned me off with the way he treated him as a child instead of an equal man.
I loved both characters and how the relationship developed over months..Patrick, having never dated someone so young didn't want the age gap to influence Colton's decisions in their relationship. It's not as though Colton lived in a college dorm or in an apartment of his own so of course parents rules come first. Glad I checked this story out (:
i felt like i knew Patrick for years The love batween Patrick and Colton felt so real