All Comments on 'How Patrick Met Colton'

by RalphyNJ

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sensual_bluesensual_blueabout 11 years ago
Wowwwwwwwwww!!!!!

I loved the whole story Patrick and Colton meeting falling in love was so damn beautiful that i can't wait to read it again, i hope there will be more about these two, the story had me captivated from beginning to end and i am so sorry that it is over, can't wait to read more of your writing, Keep up the Great Work!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
AWESOME !!

That was one of the one best (short) stories. I have ever read.!! How about making it longer. They met and loved each other. Why not make it last longer. They do have their whole (hole) life, ahead of them together. You have a very great start, of something that would be Awesome, to the future !!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Awesome back again.

I for got to add my e-mail wdenny55@yahoo.com just in caseyou plan to add more to this story Please let me know. thank you.

damejintymcgintydamejintymcgintyabout 11 years ago
Utterly Charming...

And romantic. A great story, well written. Would love another instalment to see how Patrick and Colton fare a few years down the road. Excellent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I love your story characters. The hero is always so mature, confident and patient. I wish I could find someone like that.

70sblkbutterfly70sblkbutterflyabout 11 years ago
Beautiful

This story was so well written. Very sweet; great job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Yawn!

I don't know why everyone is fawning all over this story. Nothing new. Oft repeated premise. Same old descriptions of erotic acts. I was bored.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
hey, anon yawn

Nothing wrong with an oft repeated premise well told. Nothing new under the sun and all that. Also nothing wrong with some uncomplicated caring sex acts. Plenty of complicated and uncaring sex acts all over lit. . Keep 'em coming, Ralphy....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
romance

A great romantic read of two guys who fall in love gently but inevitably. Patrick behaves as a perfect gentleman and gets his reward with the adoration shown him by Colton. And what is best is that the concentration is on the story and the romance and the sex falls properly in that context rather than being the raison d'etre,

Many more such stories please

RalphyNJRalphyNJabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thank you.

My thanks to all the people who posted or sent comments. I’ve responded individually to those who gave addresses*.

I’ve enjoyed writing the stories, and it’s gratifying to know that they bring pleasure to others.

* To sensual_blue: I tried responding to you directly, but although I was logged on, the site apparently thought my response was anonymous. Your comments were particularly gratifying, so I’m sorry I couldn’t respond as I would have liked.

sensual_bluesensual_blueabout 11 years ago
You are so Welcome!

I so enjoyed reading this story so much that i had to read it again, because it is just so beautiful and so well written, you just find yourself rooting for Patrick and Colton to get a HEA, i so hope that soon you will continue their story and i cannot wait to read more of your writing. I Thank You for showing me how beautiful True Love really is. Thanks:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Well worth the read! Good characters and a plot, though altruistic, was really great following the progression of a relationship! Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Zzzzzzzz

Boring! Dropped the read at the end of the 2nd page.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Great story, so romantic. They make a wonderful couple

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Slow read

Parts of the story was interesting and sweet others turned me off with the way he treated him as a child instead of an equal man.

sm1982sm1982almost 8 years ago
Loved how realistic the story was told

I loved both characters and how the relationship developed over months..Patrick, having never dated someone so young didn't want the age gap to influence Colton's decisions in their relationship. It's not as though Colton lived in a college dorm or in an apartment of his own so of course parents rules come first. Glad I checked this story out (:

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I would've rated this is six stars if i could

i felt like i knew Patrick for years The love batween Patrick and Colton felt so real

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