All Comments on 'How to BTB'

I guess everybody got what they wanted!

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A nasty tale about distasteful people doing horrible things. Thank god he married his sister in law, at least it might keep the gene pool somewhat isolated.

Just a bunch of unlikeable characters

Not much of a story. Just silly pandering of idiocy of sisters betraying sisters.

As Shrek would say, "What a bunch of crap!"

Seen grocery lists that were longer and more entertaining.

What utter rubbish

Meh. Just going through the motions. Boring.

A little sporadic in the telling, but a good story.

Good lord, that was a nearly unreadable, jumbled mess, but you sure punished that imaginary woman real good.

So what was her date like? A prince or a slug?

Now that's the way to BTB lol

He was a bigger asshole than she was

With some work, this could be turned into a decent story. As is, it appears to be more of you flipping the middle finger to the genre than a legitimate story. I rated it accordingly.

Meh.

No likeable characters. More outline than story. Why did she cheat? Why didn't he stop her? What about the guy who was fucking a married woman?

strange one.

You don't play with fire unless:

1) you like burning yourself

2) you enjoy the smell of ashes

3) you're stupid enough to think you're somehow different than everyone else who tried it before.

4) all the above

Huh?

With more depth you could have had an engaging story. 3*

Short, stilted, pointless, and not well written either. 1*

I like short stories that are to the point, and avoid needless details. However, this had no character development at all. This comes off more as a documentary description than a story I was engaged with.

Curious was this notes of a script you planned on using to actually write a story I can't even rate it was all over thr place

Weak...

I, uh, think I know what happened?

Didn’t quite live up to the expectations of the title.

Meh, ok I guess

That was a so so sketch in my view. Two stars.

A lot of story for the number of words. Are stories generally better when longer? Yes, but you wrote the story you wanted and did a good job.

So stupid- possibly the worst story ever written.

If this is a Loving Wives story, allow me to write a few more stories for you to fill the other Literotica categories with similar quality tales:

Anal: I fucked her in her butt.

BDSM: I fucked her all tied up.

Celebs and F/F: I fucked her, and she was famous.

Erotic Coupling: I fucked her.

Erotic Horror: I fucked her, and it was spooky.

Ex&Voy: I fucked her, and everyone watched.

First Time: I fucked her, and it was my first time.

Gay Male: I fucked him.

Group sex: We fucked her.

How to: Fuck Her.

Humor&Satire: Hehehe I fucked her.

Incest/Taboo: I fucked her, and she was my sister.

Interracial: I fucked her, and she was black.

Lesbian Sex: I fucked her (I'm a woman).

Letters and Transcripts: "Dear Mom, I fucked her."

Mature: I fucked her, but she was old.

Mind Control: I fucked her, after I controlled her mind.

Non-English: Ich habe sie gefickt.

Non-Erotic: I DIDN'T fuck her.

NonConsent/Reluctance: I fucked her, but she didn't want me to.

NonHuman: I fucked it.

Novels and Novellas: Let me spend the next 300k words telling you how I fucked her.

Reviews and Essays: I read this story about a guy who fucked her. 3/5 stars.

Romance: I made love to her.

Scifi/Fantasy: I fucked her on one of the moons of Jupiter.

Toys and Masturbation: I jerked off on her.

Transgenders and Crossdressers: I fucked her, but I was dressed in drag.

Please feel free to use any of these wonderful stories I've written to add to your bibliography. They match the quality of what you have written here, and they are my gift you you!!!

shouldn't revenge porn should be in the fetish section

Yawn...

"Anonymous:

If this is a Loving Wives story, allow me to write a few more stories for you to fill the other Literotica categories with similar quality tales:

Anal: I fucked her in her butt.

BDSM: I fucked her all tied up.

Celebs and F/F: I fucked her, and she was famous.

Erotic Coupling: I fucked her.

... "

Great, absolutely hilarious !!! That's 5 full stars for this comment. Really.

Odd, silly but readable

I'm sure there was a good story in there somewhere.

Don't like short flash stories, even a BTB.

He seems to have a fetish for sisters, not one, but three. Julie seems to have opened the door to infidelity and so I started with Julie sister, Mary for a great night. Then Susan join the circus, at least Julie had the courage to attend Susan and my wedding.

To anonymous from 10 months ago, I agree with another reviewer, 5 stars for your review. 0 stars for this crap ‘story’ though.