by totallyatease
My second time reading this, I’d lost it and have now stumbled across it again, it may be a little corny as the Author mentions, but it is very well done - hence my repeat reading! 5/5 and thank you writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.
Very nice beginning. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here.
I noticed one minor typo:
((They ate there [their] lunch...))
Thanks for sharing!
Anonymous-19
This promises to be a very enjoyable story from the beginning. Looking forward to reading more now.
Good characters and nice pacing. Details revealed naturally and enough to pique the interest.
Jason
Great start, the title got me I was thinking why was this in romance instead of scifi or nonhuman.
i like the beginning and i am looking forward to reading more
i am definitely loving this!!!
continue as i cannot wait to read moreee....
please post fast. hehehehe.
...And it's this story!!!! I love a good romance. Thanks for sharing:)
Love the beginning! Great start and I'm excited to see where it goes. More please! :)
I absolutely adored this story, really engaged with the characters and I know you said it wasn't erotic but I could feel an undercurrent. Really looking forward to your next installment.
This is such a juicy plot. You are a fine writer. I'm hooked!