by Linnet
HI, Linnet! Thanks for the callout and for allowing me to help on your story. I'll send you a PM on a few items for possible cleanup.
The story was wonderfully told throughout, with some excellent action/adventure, some rough and tough scenes, a bit of sadness, and hot sex, too. I loved Thorsten and Caitlin's negotiation and the aftermath, too, but the end was even more special as we learn the ultimate truth and can look back at the hints that might have changed so much. The title you chose was a great fit, too.
Excellent work! 5*!
Thanks, SC! Always good to have your feedback, and I’m glad it lived up to your expectations!
Thank you! It means a lot to get such positive feedback. There are so many talented people writing on here (some way better than me, though it hurts to admit it). I hope you find plenty more to tick your boxes!
Awesome story! Please add to it!
Makes me want to write my own. I'll have to figure out how to make mine different, and writing to the same level as you won't be easy!