by RobertLStevenson
A little explication is okay but you took it too far. Less clinical talk and more action would be better. So, back to your story and get these girls fucked!
Do you think you are the only one that matters here? If you hated the first chapter, why did you read the second? Shut your mouth and go read something else.
I really appreciate everyone's feedback! Thank you so much for taking the effort to write, vote, or comment. You're the best, and I'm glad you're enjoying the stories :-)
ShadowRosie, I'm sorry you really don't like them! :-)
I believe the premise is excellent, and slightly curious whether your clinically dry presentation of fact continues(I hope not).
Looking forward to reading more either way.
I feel bad for fathers that only have sons. To be left out on the wonderful treat of experiencing wonderful young women is really a let down. Perhaps once their sons are married they could be given some dispensation to enjoy the wonders of such young wonderful bodies.
Beware, this author pulls an underage bait and switch.
When you contact him for stories or go to any of his other sites, the characters are suddenly 15-17 years old.
BEWARE