All Comments on 'How to Train Your Daughter Ch. 12b'

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gaia_gurlgaia_gurlover 3 years ago

These keep getting better! Really love this series.

winterplayingwinterplayingover 3 years ago
awesome story

Really good story.

BmatsBmatsover 3 years ago

What happened to 12a?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Fantastic

Great story that keeps getting better! I can't wait to see more of her lessons and training from the male teachers. The deeper the better!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
there is no 12a

it's missing :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
No 12a!!!!

There is no 12 looking forwards to it! Please repost

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
12a missing

Where is 12a?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

WOW Robert you keep out doing yourself.......tyvm Charlotte

Darklordx42Darklordx42over 3 years ago
Amazing Series keeps getting Better

Wow, as others have said, you keep getting hotter and hotter with this series. The next stories can't come soon enough. And it looks like Chapter 11 has a continuing story coming as well. Absolutely fantastic :) I can't wait to see what the rest of the professors are like at the school!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
So damn hot

This series is just awesome and oh such a turn on. Please keep posting more in the days to come.

Looking forward to it eagerly. By far the best on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

All of your stories so far are excellent. I hope that you continue the series. Looking forward to Serena and Selena's training for their festival along with more father daughter experiences. Maybe you can have some whole family fun times with Morgan Lynn involved with the daughters.

The only possible inconsistencies I have found so far concern Captain Jack, ..., as to whether he is an eligible male trainer. I don't recall any mention of an adult daughter that celebrated her festival, only a Greek wife that died. Also, Chapter 2 lacks a proper explanation of the role of married women at different times of their lives. Morgan Lynn, for example, trains young men between the ages of 18 and 24, at her discretion I presume. This is not discussed in the basic rules of the universe.

Perhaps you could write a story about a young girl getting pregnant out of wedlock, even though that isn't supposed to happen. What does the father / family do in that situation? How does the community respond?

Good luck! And keep writing!

Akirababe87Akirababe87almost 3 years ago

This was excellent. The anticipation leading up to the first penetration and the detailed description from the headmaster about the purpose of the penetration, all spoke to the BDSM fan in me.

Excellent descriptions of the acts, though I wouldn't have minded reading a bit more in depth about Ryan's depth test and gradual increase in force as it happened, knowing that was the plan beforehand really helped me visualize it.

As always, five stars for excellent content. It didn't take long for me to start craving this one after the last, so I'm sure I'll be caught up in no time!

wombat52wombat52over 2 years ago

ernjoying this series. well done.. more?

luv2custripluv2custrip11 months ago

The scene of the principal performing his intimate examination of Abigail and watching her react while staring deeply into her eyes is a classic of eroticism.

Excellent!

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