by Friskee_cpl
As you know I'm a big fan of your stories, and this is probably the best one of the batch. Well done!
Thank you for your spelling etc. (yes a full stop after etc.), there is life outside the usa.
I am so surprised as to how great it was to read a well written story in Australian English and to be able to relate to places and what I assume as being typical easy going aussie characters. Thank You I am now going to read all your other stories.
Cheers Kascouple
PS I wish we had a club like that near us lol
I loved your story I suspect it was loosely based on truth from the accurate details of the sex scenes and the characters. Let me know if I am right!
Pure, lovable bullshit. Worthy of the sexiness of Aussie men and women. Aussie English is fine by us. But just look up "peak" in an English, Aussie or American dictionary.
Then look up "peek."
The look up "pique."
Just sayin, as we say in the USA
From one Aussie to another... Damn fine story... Really well written... And seriously sex-funk HOT!!
Also great to see reference to some of my local hangouts :)
Great read. No prob with the Aussie slang or spelling, for Pete's sake, it's set in Australia! Like the "pre-warning" and follow up. We'll done. And what the hell is anyone who has "issues" with the story doing on this website anyways?
More please
A great read. Enjoyed the story and the descriptions immensely.
Great character development! I love Sharon. I’ve been reading the rest of her and Marcus’ adventures and wanted to compliment the first story I read. Great reading!
Absolutely amazing story easy-to-follow in even though it had the Australian wording still easy-to-follow excellent choice character environments excetera honestly it would be nice to places like this existed and healthy relationships like this existed but again this is fantasy which is why we enjoy it so much honestly best story you've written sincerely The Living Word
I haven't been there for years.
What did you say the name of that bar was?, lol
My first time reading one of your stories, I loved it, all good clean, dirty, fun, had by all
#5 from me
No problem with the language. It’s only uneducated people who don’t know the wonderful variety in the English language. Great story, great fun for all.