All Comments on 'Howling Roar: Fated Love Ch. 02'

I am intrigued by the story. I particularly like this new type of character...these kin who are almost like a were/human hybrid it seems. I haven't read the original version of this story. I assume Lucian was hearing Lumia's voice when she was speaking to him? If he did have something with her how could any relationship with Sapphira be trusted as real and not just a desire for what he had? I like that she is wanting to know the truth of what happened and not just assuming he is guilty. I hope more details are given on all of this.

I found it very confusing when you switched from them to whoever was talking about the two of them. I think you should have separated that with a line or with a heading of some sort or just by using better transitional words like 'x and y watched the two kin staring at each other...'. It was difficult/too abrupt the way you entered and moved on from that part.

Other than that I like the story and look forward to the next chapter.