by hubbysheather
I for one love the story but fail to see what other readers
take time reading then complaining about the story.
its a shame you bovver reading the stories at all.
it seem you don't like what you read.
so why don't you find some other hobbie to keep you
amused you sad soul.
It was rough and the grammar and punctuation could have been better but the story was excellent! It made me very wet!
It is a good submission.. pun intended. I loved it. Just keep writing if you enjoy it and ignore the others.
Could you please give us a physical description of you? Keep the updates coming. I can't wait to hear how you were instructed to tAke the next step to full blown sex.