All Comments on 'Human Reproduction Ch. 01'
by fidget1
- 10 Comments
Anonymousover 2 years agoSure was nice of Joey to show up in the middle of a sexual encounter, deliver one line, and then disappear forever into nothingness.
Anonymousover 2 years agoFYI, The wrong name was used (accidently or not). I've noticed a number of these stories use the wrong name a time or 2 then go back to the correct name (sometimes it's a character from the story, sometimes just a random name). Its almost like it's an inside joke / secret point (maybe a copyright or plagiarism proof). Most people don't notice it, I find it annoying and want to fix it, but with as many as I've seen it just about has to be on purpose. Keep an eye out and you'll see what I mean (some authors do it more than others).
Anonymousover 2 years agoDamn, one of my top squicks is when people say the stuff your professor put in his lecture as though it's factual, but I also have a breeding kink, so I'm usually somewhat conflicted reading stories that focus on impregnation and have to push the squickiness aside to enjoy them, but this was absolutely perfect! I got to have my cake and eat it too, so to speak. Thanks for posting.
Jom8999over 2 years agoAs a new writer, I appreciate how hard it is to tell a good story. I enjoyed this story very much, which I feel is always the acid test. Well done. Please continue the series, I look forward to seeing how it develops.
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