All Comments on 'Humanity 2.0, Year 002, Day 291'

So VERY good. I'm really enjoying this story and looking forward to more.

I like how it is written as his reccolection of what occurred "back then" from the future. It is an entertaining story, and it has an actual plot, and that makes me happy.

The story is available on 2 other websites if you look up the title. On one of the sites, there are 8 more chapters available up to "Year 130, Day 71", and it was last updated months ago. Same author. It'd be nice to know if the story will continue or die though, assuming the author is active here.

Thank you very much for the story! It is very much appreciated, and I'm sorry if I'm redirecting web-traffic where you don't want it redirected.

This is perhaps my favorite erotic sci fi story I've read so far. Please do continue with the series in general!

Thanks for the positive feedback, all. I haven't completely abandoned this story, but it is slow going. I have the first 'book' finished - it ends just before the Year 130 chapter posted on MCS - but I had originally intended three and it's a huge amount of work.

To answer Mr. or Ms. Anonymous, I don't particularly mind if anyone visits mcstories to read ahead. I'm just submitting one chapter at a time here on literotica, and it's going at the speed it takes them to vet chapters before posting (usually 4 to 5 days, seems?).

You said this story is on two other sites, though... that's a bit worrying. I only ever submitted this story to mcstories.com previously. I know they had some affiliation with ASSTR, but I thought that ended a long time ago. What was the other one?

Great Sci-fi story. Please continue.

I was indeed talking about MCstories and asstr! Like I said before, they did credit you. Now that's it been searched for, it looks like there are other results hiding your story, but I was still able to find it using Bing.

asstr.org/~mcstories/HumanityTwoPointOh/index.html

I wish you the best!

There is a space in the comment below that kills your link if you copy-paste.

It's 'index.html' and not 'inde x.html'

This is the chapter that lost me. i love lesbian encounters, but this just felt hollow. the two girls sleeping with his sister basically behind his back, his sister being a gigantic fucking intractable bitch, all the girls treating him like garbage the entire trip by constantly fucking each other while leaving him with scraps...

yeah thank god these supposed 'perfect' humans aren't real. sounds like a nightmare.

I agree with anonymous. This was a nightmare. What happened to the advice he was given to stop caring too much! In this chapter he's like a b**ch and not taking control. I didn't like it as much.

I totally agree with Den101. Dude is a little pussy wooped bitch

Obviously they are not keeping in mind that they will live for hundreds, if not thousands of years together, and that having a good relationship with her is kind of fucking important.

Emily made it way to tough on her little brother that she supposedly loved and protected.