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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Another good part

Excellent pace, excellent characters. I like the notion of a polyamoric society such as this and wonder how 'Humanity' really will help society at large. I agree with the premise that ridding ourselves of greed for more and more money will be beneficial to society, especially as we really do need to begin working together to solve the problems caused by such greed.

Would members of humanity be a good enough group to be considered our best representatives to the rest of the universe?

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Very nice start with a secret benevolent organization

It would be nice (and perhaps just as satisfying as the sex) in future chapters to see Humanity working for good subtly in the background staying anonymous. There also could be tension if a renegade should be tempted to seek power. But of course the author is boss, and writes extremely engagingly about nudism. Intriguing story.

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