All Comments on 'Humble Pie for Thanksgiving'

Wrong category yet again cupcake... Just put your stuff in the gay male category or the self pity masochistic one.... no wonder your wife leads you instead of being your partner. In general, your stuff leaves me pissed off.... At least give your characters some balls.

Say's it all.

or the characters. However the technical part of your writing was good, I think.

I didn't care for your story but realize that it's just a story.

I won't do as some and insult you, instead I will use the ultimate form of censorship and not read anymore of your work along these lines.

You sir (or madam) are a sad person. Writing garbage. I can only assume your character here reflects you yourself!

I really do understand that every one alive has fantasies. But is this really the best you can do? Oh dear.

Zero appeal.

another piece of shit story told by a piece of shit.

If this is "another" story you don't like from this writer, why are you bothering to read his stories if not to leave any constructive criticism? Just skip them and leave him and his stories alone. Ditto to what woodmanone wrote on not insulting and just not reading.

Hardly very loving, misplaced I think

Your in the wrong category. Try the castrated wimp ass cuckold husband category. Just kidding. Not. Try fantasy catagory

Sorry, but it pretty much sucks! From both sides...for the "loving" wife to treat her husband in such a way, and for the husband to accept it is equally screwed up. Once in awhile I enjoy your stories, but in far to many (for me) the wife is a controlling bitch and the husband a wimp husband....if that is what gets you off...fine, but it pretty much sucks for me.

Badly written and just generally horrible.

When he played the shrink in that GEICO commercial..."why don't you take a trip to nambie-pambie land and see if you can get a serving of self-confidence"! You Jerk-wad...(he said Jack-wagon). This character has NO spine whatsoever! Sorry, just doesn't ring my bell. Keep writing, your topics must appeal to someone, and I'm sure you're enjoying it, too. That's what this site is about...we all enjoy ourselves...ignore the assholes who can't seem to maintainsome sense of decorum. They can't help themselves when it comes to preaching their idea of morals.

Not at all badly written. It hurt to read. There is a difference between a painful story and a story that is poorly written; both are unpleasant to read but the first is because the life portrayed was terrifying to even think about.

Prefix your story with " WARNING Wimp shit story"

Many of us will ALWAYS score a CUCKOLD story very low. I do and will. I hate CUCKOLD WIMP stories. So, WARN US so we don't read this shit.

Your writing should be on Bathroom Tissue!! then some good use could be applied to it. What a waste of my time.

Technically, not terrible. Content, bad. I agree, you should label these submissions so people know that the main character is going to be a spineless, weeping cheesedick. I don't know why authors keep writing this stuff when they know that this kind of self flagellation doesn't go well with the reader? I have come to the opinion that they must have a loathing for the women in their stories and women in general as they are always depicted in the most heartless and depraved way possible.

bake the bitch

This is shit and you are a closet queer .

Somehow I have to think this is supposed to be humorous. I think not even a wimp of a man could enjoy this without laughing at the author.

That is a very nasty fetish you have there. I can only hope writing about your lifestyle has some kind of healing karma for you.

I would hate to think that any one outside of a slave BDSM relationship would live like this.

As for the fetish? Take two Animal Nitrate mixed with acid tablets before you go to bed tonight. You will feel so much better in the morning. All your cares and worries will end.

This is so unlike you, something you want us to know - huh?

there'll be screaming vitriol from the assholes, some 'guys' in full on pant mode and, I hope, a few who will have appreciated the good writing. I accept that your fantasies are so out there and you probably aren't intending to troll crawl, so if I get down on your level(I'm happily married in a normal healthy and extremely sexual relationship, we're pretty deep as to our fantasies)I can gnash my teeth and squirm and at the same time appreciate this. I hated your story involving the Haitian disaster, but you've grown as a writer since. I'm very glad I'm not the guy in the story, but well done for touching a nerve. It'll serve as a warning...

Author and readers would be better served if the story warned readers up front that cuckolded wimp would be the main character.

How sick can you get. He so fucking stupid to put up with her horse shit and since he's so glad to have her, he deserve what he gets. Yikes.

Whatever happened to the good LW stories? I'm guessing 95% of all new authors write trash anymore. The wimpy humiliating cuckold theme is taking over this genre. Too bad, maybe it's time to look for a new site and hope for the best. ML

Hey Boss, This is one of the mast fucked up stories you have ever wrote--why, are you turning into a cuck. Come on Boss wise up, no more shit.

This is one of those stories which makes me wish that Literotica had a "Sick Catrgory:" you know, one wherein the author could get some counselling & psychiatric help.

that he is proud to be married to her? I mean really, what does she do for him? Is she an amazing cook? Does she renovate the house? Is she a financial genius? Because there is nothing in this story to indicate why she is a fantastic wife.

I wont bother with the story .... uno starro

I know this is fiction, unfortunately I for the life of me can understand sick bastards like these, which get of on watching their wife’s fuck other men, even bigger black men. Whom in there right mind wants to do this. You say you love them, but you want other men to fuck them, excuse me. You can not love them very much, if you want this to happen, its totally sick, even worse is when you make a totally respectable lady/wife into do this for your benefit, when she clearly doesn’t want. In case of this story I’d be divorcing the husband, as he’s 1 sick bustard, I’m over 6’4” plus a good 280 plus pound of muscle, yes I like think of myself as a man’s man, and there no way id ever contemplate allowing or even condoning my wife to FUCK another man EVER

my name in the list of "Similar Stories". This story was sad. I know there are men willing to live like this and women with that level of disrespect for men... but I'm not one of them and not writing about them either.

Story was funny but you are a real loser, sorry about that.

story is pretty funny and f'd up. cuckolding is pretty f'd up and disgusting. And lets be clear about one thing, the is a name for a woman involved in cuckolding "supreme whoredom"

WTF????????

WTFYFW

Next time, I'll know better than to read one of your stories.

not good

What a splendid Holiday story. My faith in humankind has been restored. Plus, now I'm all hungry for a tasty treat. Yum yum.

dude that was horrible!!!!

1) buy some whiskey

2) buy a revolver and 1 bullet

3) drink whiskey

4) play Russian roulette until he gets lucky

why?

because he let his 'wife' cut his balls off and feed them to him

Only something in a minus ten would do here.

for a man. Agree that he needs a revolver and a bullet, but he should use the bullet on himself and rid the world of his useless existence.

1* because I couldn't rate it less.

I've read other stories by this author that did not suck. This story is depressing, non erotic, and frankly not entertaining. I think a mark of a good story would be that you'd want to read it over and over...one read of this story is one too many.

We thought you were considerate of your readers, intelligent, gifted and creative.

This dribble says you have the wisdom and mentality of a kindergarten fantasy driven dropout!

Life-style comments from people with DIFFERENT perversions are just plain fruitless and silly! BakeBoss needs little or no writing tips that I care to give! (except that 'humble' in the title is too subtle to be an adequate warning!)

Unrated

Bakboss needs to get the dick out of his ass and grow a set, what a whimp and it must take one to write this shit.

some people are not ment to write

Enoug already with the wussy stories.

A real WACC story for sure with one dimensional characters. Keep trying though

This story was crap from start to finish. The writing was poor at best and the story was incredibility weak.

it does demonstrate how some couples get together and live. of course she was a user, and a cheater, but he didn't seem to mind, I've seen the reverse enough times, where the hubby treats the wife this way.

Thankfulness is a warm gun.

Sick Fuck

Your character should grow a pair.

What a waste of print.

and wishes his failures on the rest of us, TK U MLJ LV NV

Sick story about sick people...Deserved a negative rating...1*

a 5!!!!

This story would be laughable if it wasn't so pathetic. What a tiny mind

one mentally ill living with another mentally

Try not to hurt yourself little man.

WTF did I just read?

The only positive thing about this is that it was very short.

It was nothing but a cheating cunt and a disgustingly wimpy pussy of a man.

How can you blame her though? He deserves zero respect!

I don't know where his balls are, maybe they never dropped.

I would say that he needs to get the fuck out of there, but at this point he is such a pussy I doubt he would wipe his ass without her telling him and he would die from all the bacteria building up.

Read a couple of your...crap! Made me sick to my stomach!

You must be a cuckold wimp yourself!

you figure it out

Either kill her...or kill yourself. Or both!

Stop writing now!

You are one sick puppy.. Not even worth 1* .

Do us all a favour, find a nice quiet spot, put a pistol in your mouth, and put us out of your misery.

He took her filthy underwear and put them in a ziplock bag. The next day he met with his attorney and filed for a divorce. It's either divorce her or wait until she passes along some nasty disease he can't divorce. Even a stupid man dumps her. This was just disgusting.

1 star

Bakeboss

Some feedback if I may on your story. It is a fairly standard description of a slut wife/submissive cuck hubby relationship. As such it would have been more appropriate for your submission to have been deposited in the Fetish sub category. I am sure that the theme, and the characterizations will be applauded by the cuck wimp brigade. However, I found the story highly derivative and puerile in its depiction of the two central charcters.

..that cowards like this actually exist. But even if they do, who wants to read about them? This story is trash. Not worth the couple of minutes it took to read it. Zero stars

It's a big world out there. Run and embrace it! Poor wimp. I actually feel sorry for him. He is badly broken.

I would Never have let My Wife do that .. My Ex disrespected Me ,That is why She is My Ex Wife .. The Wife I have now is a great Lady and I am Damn Lucky to have her .

Pure unadulterated shit.

It takes a really damaged fool to write something like this.

5*

really she treats him like this, the guy has no respect for himself why would she have any for him

It's a weird and sick fetish. What turns you on? Abuse you say? That sounds like a victim that internalizes self loathing, and feels too inferior to fight back against their abuser.

This is why all cucks should be snipped. Conversely, all abusive women should share the same fate as abusive men...

This is fucking puke

It's wonderful that his wife allowed the tiny dicked cuckold to enjoy a real holiday feast it was much more than it deserved to be allowed to suck the sperm of a real man from deep inside of his wife's pussy. What a Thanksgiving feast.

5***

There are many ways the husband can kill himself you know.

But if transitioning to a female with a pussy can't hurt either.

Just give up the man card already and go get that pussy surgery.

NOW!