by a_random_user
That could be a lead into someone else gaining control over his wife in a longer more detailed story.
She sounds like a right slut are the videos on the net. If so what's the web site? So I can rub my pole over it.
Actually, I was a stripper for a decade, and always put the panties over the stockings so I can remove them and still have my stockings on. Makes sense on stage...
What?....your wife wears her panties over her pantyhose? That's a first!!!
I like your writing. It reminds me of Jerzy Kosinksi... are you a fan of his? I've read a few of your stories today and all around enjoy your writing and your creativity. If anything my only critique is that I wish the stories were a bit longer. I haven't read any of your series yet, but I will.
To the last anonymous: all persons described in this story are seniors in high school, so they are all over 18.
Your story was chosen for highlighting under the Story Feedback thread on ANDTHEEND'S thread.
I gave you a 5 vote for your effort.
While any of these situations would have worked as the basis for a story, just listing them off doesn't work too well.
How about getting her gang banged and used like a whore in front of her close friend.
Show her that she is nothing more than a piece of ass, to be used anyway her husband decides.
Well used but not abused