All Comments on 'Humiliation'

Don't usually read nonconsent but i like your stories. I dont think she can change that much and payback will be a bitch.

Thank you

Mike from Texas

I like this one almost as much as Leaving the Navy

We've all met them! Girls and women who think it is their right to have their men friends keep them in luxury in return for an occasional bit of pussy. While she deserved all that she got, I'm usually against such plot lines, since the result is overly cruel humiliation, but I got a great belly laugh out of how our hero screwed Marta, on the boat, without actually screwing her! It was a neat ending. Really nice job, Pete.

Complete and utter modern version of taming of the shrew!

I liked your story of the Shrew and her comeuppance. I don’t normally pay any attention to NonConsent stories but saw a review in the Feedback Portal by PEATBOG and then one by KOLKORE and had to read what got there approval. It was funny, very well written and engrossing. That is what you need to make an entertaining story for me. Thank you for your fine effort and entertainment.<P>PT

Wonderfully written, you gave great character development and I was able to understand the charachter's motivations as well as get totally turned on! Amazing job!

Good storytelling. The characters felt real with their flaws and foibles. The plot was interesting and well-handled. The characters came into conflict, learned about themselves, and resolved that conflict. Thank you for your effort.

I would not fuck a girl someone else just fucked especially if she had not cleaned up so I dropped your score one for that and for the fact the guy was stupid enough to keep on dating her when he knew what she was. The words are golddigger and whore, fucking for items is fucking for money.

Awesome story, I hope you continue along this line and any others you think up.

Beautifully done! I love the way he thought things through and then came up with the idea for a suit that 'disappears' when it gets wet. What a way to teach such a most valuable lesson!! I liked the character development. The only part I didn't really like is that she thought all men needed to be manipulated and that relationships were all about 'give me' or 'buy me'. He needs to "Humilate" the mother for teaching her daughters to be so selfish and uncaring.

Now that is a man that knows how to handle a woman. *sigh* If only I could find one for real...

I like a story with a moral :) Good job!

I liked his solution and I would hope he could change her. Thanks for your words and time.

This was a wonderful story.....I enjoyed it very much.

2 manipulation freaks find true love!

You mined a strong vein.

Well cool I picked 2 in a row with a similar theme and an excellent read as well -

Thanks yet again -

I am sure he would not have gone this far unless he really cared for her. Good for them.

I really enjoyed your story ala Taming of the Shrew .

Why go to all that damn trouble just to get her back....Fuck the effort was wasted, bitch would act right for a while but in the end she would find some way to totally fuck you over....women are sneaky and crafty you pull that shit and you would find yourself in a shitstorm of epic proportions

slow but i got it. he wanted a woman and there are times when you have to find the right one and if not the right one you need to train her. like riding a horse, it's not the mount it is the rider that counts.

why waste that much time with her, really? she is bascially the same and her 'change' is genuine? take the lesson and go on...

pain and humbility. TK U MLJ LV NV

because that kind of thing usually leaves me cold. I don't feel many people deserve to be humiliated. She did, and it was gentle. The ending made it all worth while, but I hope he mellows to treat her like an equal in the near future :) Lynn

It wasn't a mind blowing story but a very good one at that. I liked a lot keep up the good work, simple, clean. and to the point

it was a man giving his girl friend choices, even if they were hard ones, TK U MLJ LV NV

Excellent story. Loved it. If only everybody understood the way to write a story like this.

Very nice.

fucking stupid. he should have left her way before.

fucking great and dear annony didn't like it! Fy\uck you in the heart annony you fool!

Made me chuckle when he left her on the boat. Good imagination you have there.

But there's no way in hell he should have stayed with her. Give her her purse, her bag and clothes and drop her at her house. You don't change a lifetime of crazy. And she's just plain nuts. He'd have to be insane to stay with her. She'd be back to her old ways in no time flat. Nope. Time to bail. Love? She doesn't know the meaning of the word. Awful ending.

Yeah, she started as a manipulating bitch but she kind of grew on you. It wasn't really all her fault. She was a product of her environment with the mother and older sisters and all.

Not a bad story. She started out being an ass and turned out to be a nice person.

Given her character, the minute she gets into her house she would have slammed the door in his face and never spoken to him again. He'd be lucky if she didn't serve him with a lawsuit. No fucking way she continues a relationship with him. Awful ending

My ex-husband, when we were dating, had me gather up all of my underwear and lingerie and throw it away. He took me shopping and replaced them. None of the new items were similar to what I had once owned. I now realize that he did not want me wearing garments in which I had been seen by any other man during intimate moments. He did not want my thoughts straying to other men as we had sex.

I thought that this was a good story, but there was one question left hanging.

How did Marta realize that he had organized the humiliation to punish or teach her a lesson. For someone like Marta, that realization would not come naturally.

I then he woke up in his cell an realised it was all a dream. Fucking idiots the both of them they deserve each other

Good story. Maria decision to change her life style is very brave. Deciding to trust someone is never easy, especially after she was brought up using men.

LOL