All Comments on 'Hunger'

There is more right?

Seems like an attempt at creating a new '50 shades' good ideas behind it just at times a bit long/cringy

I certainly hope there is more, Midnight Angel. I cannot wait to see where this is going. You have such an excellent grasp of the concepts behind the D/s relationship that it becomes a moving piece. Anyone who does not understand the depth behind it won't get your piece, though, so be wary. Your work is fantastic and I cannot wait to see more.