All Comments on 'Hungry Eyes!'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
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#1

marylandlinemarylandlineover 3 years ago

my vote is for story #1. four stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Should have stopped at 1. The brother wasn't as good, and the stranger was not very good at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
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Story 1

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good story

1 was my favorite, I would have liked For Grandpa and Julie to do more together. 2 was good too. Three was too different and violent from the others for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I enjoyed story # 1 . I was waiting for Julie and grandpa to do more

BigJim48BigJim48over 3 years ago
Hungry

Story 1 was the best & most believable! Grandparents taking care of their granddaughter - no need for incest - love of two people for each other and their granddaughter.

Campus77Campus777 months ago

I too have to agree that #1 was the best and most believable. #2 was more like a LIT story and #3 made me wish she was my grandmother. What a woman!

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I promise that the stories I write will have a believable premise and the characters will be regular people.