All Comments on 'Hungry Like The Wolf Ch. 03'

I've enjoyed the 3 chapters BUT for me it's very distracting when there are so many errors. For example the main characters name is Cara not Tara. There were MANY other errors such as using the wrong words in the sentence. Just proofing this would have given the story such a better feel. Look forward to the next chapter & hope its proofed first.

Fair point well made. Despite 3 runs at proofing, it evidently wasn't enough. Thx for the good reminder.