All Comments on 'Hunt in the Club'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Lost me at the first sentence

"I entered the club, feeling the throbbing base penetrating me."

It would be a 'throbbing bass"

Get an editor!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Loved it!!

This was brilliant, so hot and real. Please continue their story! They love each other, you gotta let them have babies! Lots of babies from theamount of shagging they do!

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