All Comments on 'Hunter Hunted Ch. 07'

my hat goes off to you. You have got a God given talent and I love every story you post. Keep them coming.

I love the way this story is going. Can not wait to see what's going to happen next. Keep up the great work, and thanks for posting.

love your reading your work. i like this version better but even you kept the old one..i would have still read it.

I think... MORE PLEASE!

That was a great chapter, thank you for the rewrite, a much more believable story. PJ xx

I love the rewrite!

Thank you for valuing our opinions and trying to make us happy. This version is much more true to the characters.

..about the last chapter once re-written seemed as if you'd done it just to please (I was one of those not liking how the story had been written previously).

But this chapter looks to have got you right back on track, well done.

Excellent -- I love the "shell" idea. :) I really want to see Hunter keep pushing Mirage, I think she needs it. I also want to know more about Hunter. :)

For those of us who loved the first way, I am so glad you kept the shells. Also that the shell had a bad reaction to Lady Melody. I was afraid that that would be overlooked. I love it and hope to read more before you stop to write for nano, and good luck with that by the way.

LOve this story and the characters but think i am liking the other version better.

But, I think that your writing and stories are brilliant and to be completely honest I REALLY, REALLY enjoyed the first version A LOT. I don't know why people feel like the understand what the story line should be more than the author!! YOU are the author and this is about your vision of how the story should go and if they don't like it then they have 2 options...suck it up or just stop reading it!!

But i love your stories nonetheless and I am excited for the next chapter and to find out about those weird shells.

Please, please, please continue this story!!!

I liked each version for the differences but I think you kept the center or heart of the story the same. As the author, I think you have the say in which version speaks most of what you want to say. I love reading all the versions though and seeing all the changes and how they exert their influences on the story. Either way you go, it is a wonderful treat to read. You are amazingly talented!

I didn't get to read the first version... I thought this was a great chapter. I can't wait for more in this story!

I didn't get a chance to read the first chapter but it seems fine the way it is now. I like the shell, that's an interesting take on reversing vampire transformation. It also answered my question about Melody. As much as I liked Mira not being a push over, I'm starting to get irriated that she doesn't get all passion swept. Hunter has to have loved her already, before the touching and stuff to be willing to be so like understanding but not...If that makes sense. Very nice almost passion swept scene. =]

I like the tension that is building between Hunter and Mirage.

I think it's a great chapter and I'm looking forward to finishing the rest of the story!

MissWizz

I've always found your work amazing, and I totally agree with the others. Sometimes I'm just in too much of a hurry to get to the next chapter instead of stopping for a comment.

i'm gonna have nightmares about that one, shivering, love all your work, please don't ever stop

I think he has called her prickly and a bitch too many times. That is the only thing I would change. That shell is freakin' freaky too. Ick!

Can't wait till mira stops being so frigid. Hope she gives in next time.

You are an impressive writer. i'm absoluely in love with this story. Your characters are just entrancing.

If I have to stop every few chapters to give you feedback, I'm never going to be done reading this story.

you are one of the best authors that I have ever read in either a book or on the net.. Thank you for sharing your stories with us. This is the first time that I have seen your writings.

Ditto on previous posts agree somewhat with the previous post...you're good...still waiting on the erotic mind blowing stuff., but your're good, great, *stroke, stroke* ~(s)Peeps

Really enjoying the story.

Whatever you here or read from everyone else you have a talent for writing it is compelling I have read several of your stories and like them all keep up the good work and I'll keep enjoying it

Have really enjoyed your stories for as long as I've been reading. You're one of my favorite authors.

Thank you :-)

I love the work you put into these stories and enjoy reading them. I hope you don't remove them from the site.

Personally I like these characters and this story... I will be saddened if you stop writing about them.... I think you have great imagination and talent.

Great story thank you for sharing

Freekin great