All Comments on 'Hunter Hunted Ch. 08'

OMG you are so amazing and I love all of your stories.....please please keep them coming

Yes, i loved it much better. Thank you for taking a step back, reviewing readers' comments and making the brave decision to rewrite the chapters. This has not only reinforce my admiration in you being one of my favourite best writers but also a humble one. Good job!

What can be said, you keep getting better and better!.

thanks..hugs.dan

want more....soon!!!

I love this story I really do! But, Mira's cocky additude is getting annoying!

I like this version's Mira better. Just because you fall in love doesn't mean you get wimpy. Mira is just the right mix of kickass and vulnerable. I like the direction the plot is going too. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

This is good, I like the plot coming together. I'm a bit undecided on Mira. I'm glad she isn't falling all over herself and fawning over Hunter, but she's walking a line where she's on the border of unlikeable. But there's time yet! :)

Not sure but this version is just sitting right with me, where are hunter and mirages other team mates. Its a great read and it flows good it just missing something.

Good stuff. I like that Mira is not giving so quickly. Hunter is a little much...he seems to have his hands on her all the time now. I'm surprised she hasn't hurt him. ha.

I am curious as to what happened to her old team. I like the new characters...but was enjoying the "furball" and her old boss.

Can't wait to read the next chapter. She's got to give just a little. I'm waiting for Aphrodite have Lineal to tell her its okay to love again.

Thanks so much for sharing your talent and imagination with us!

I thought this was a great fast chapter! Hunter is a great hero persona and I hope he does spank her! Can't wait for more!!

That was a great chapter, can't wait for the next.

One thing that I enjoy so much about Daniellekitten's work is that in the ASP stories especially, the women are just really tough, strong, and powerful. I find that very attractive, and the ASP ladies have got it in spades. Even when they are kind of shrewish at first they are ultimately tender with their guys. That's also attractive. Strong, confident, powerful, and tough women are hot! Mirage rocks. Callie rocks.

Fantastic chapter. PJ xx

Even though Mira's distancing attitude is annoying me, I love how strong and confident she is, she knows how to handle NEARLY everything going on around her with this tough-too hot to handle-chick attitude. But it kind of makes me miss your more soft and sweet characters like Angel and what not who were sensual and sexy without realizing it.

Totally dig this chick!

Liked that you made her a bit vulnerable to Hunter by telling him what set Bia off. I do have to laugh at the role reversal. It's usually women who want to talk things to death. Hunter is acting like a woman more than a man in that regard :)

What will her touch do??? Please let me find out soon!

Although I am interested in what happens with this story, I don't plan on reading any more installments. The non-stop mutual bitchiness between Hunter and Mirage is so incessant and annoying that I simply don't care anymore about either one of them. A little nastiness goes a long way; but, eight endless episodes of carping is just too wearying.

I'm enjoying the chapters. I'm not sure what everyone's so upset about. I like where everything is going even if Mira is a little bitchy to everyone.

Deam! Keep it up girl!

I love it!!!! i love your stories!!! Please keep them coming!!

I really like this series... Keep the great work coming

The insensate bitching between your two leads at times SEEMS a bit much...but then you look at their motivations...(3000 years of not being touched, watching your loved ones suffer agonizing deaths AND we find in this chapter Mirage was betrayed and raped..) well, I guess we can expect her to be a little bitchy!! And having a five year perpetual hard on for a woman you can't touch might make you a bit cranky too! So like most other readers here...I'm LOVING this story!

...DocWolfie is usually not that far off. I guess I missed out on the good stuff from those previous stories before you musta edited the shit out of. Look...let's agree that you can develop character...where the hell is the descriptive action...fighting...sex...chase scenes...something other than fucking dialogue that we read this shit to avoid. Excuse me, it's your universe and I'm just a Peeping Tom passing thru...no more comments unless the story's so over the top affirmative it'll make your head pop with pride from what I write. Shit! (tempermental, fix shit that's nothing wrong with, why in the hell post on literotica if you ain't gonna deliver the goods, authors)

Awesome! I especially love the bitchiness between Hunter & Mira .... it's going to make for one helluva sex scene I imagine .... you go girl :-)

When will I start seeing books......I like this story and would like to see more.....

God I love these stories

I really enjoy your stories, thank you

I'd say more but I want to get to the next chapter.

Mindless and talentless. 1* of course.

Trust idiot illiterate Ausie to like this drivel!

loved it, hell even if i didnt i still gave it 5* just to spite the asshole who writes comments just to be an asshole

I totally love this story! Character development right of the start, teammate's annoying each other, it's starting out awesome! A few typos, but since you plan on cleaning it up for publishing I don't mind! Looking forward to reading more of your work!

Still enjoying the series. Thanks again for posting. Never mind the trolls, they lurk under every bridge.

Keep writing! I plan to read everything you write!