All Comments on 'Hunter Hunted Ch. 12'

I am on pins and needles for an update...I hope they burn whoever is responsible for that orange liquid. I know everything has a weakness and I hope they find one for the orange stuff it sounds deadly too deadly.

It just keeps getting better and better. Can't wait for more!

I wonder if Nicky is going to be a new ASP addition and the downfall of the baddie? PJ xx

Loved it and can't wait for the next chapter. I just hope Nicky and Arielle don't hurt each other. They seem happy together.

Loving the plot so far. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up thw great work.

I'm glad that you are excited about this story. Hopefully that will mean chapters faster, because they are so hard to wait for when the story is this good.

I'm more interested in Hunter and Mirage than Nick and Arielle right now, but I don't mind the addition of those characters. Looking forward to seeing how you pull it all together.

Something had to be up with Arielle there's no way a person would be that willing to give up their life like that for someone they just met, it's not even like they had a good conversation or anything. I bet she's in on it. Anyways, good chapter, hot scenes, awesome page turner. Keep it up.

i like how just when i think i know what is happening you throw in a twist to send my mind rambling with conclusions but i dont know which one is correct. you are an amazing writer keep it up

I've been wondering how Nicky had been able to resist feeding off of Arielle, with his increased hunger and all. Also their relationship is moving quite fast, does that have to do with the stuff they gave him? He's become one of those super-Vamps; now that they've done the deed, does that make her a super-Vamp, too? And what else happend to her, the end was rather ominous? Will he be able to save her, if needed?

I really love this story!!!

MissWizz

I love Nicky! Him and Ariel are adorable. I just hope they aren't killed for having the orange goop in them. It was a relief when you finally brought Hunter and Mira together. Good stuff.

Love the story so far. Nicky and Arielle moved their relationship along pretty quickly, not a complaint, just an observation.

I really do enjoy these stories. I've been reading through your stories and noticed that you like feedback. I just wanted to say that I think that you're doing a great job. I truly enjoy your work. Thanks for the entertainment.

Keep going girl, your story is almost as addicting as fan-fucking-tastic sex!! LOL

So good I'm cutting the comment short to get to the next chapter.