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She murmured his name and he managed to find the comforter, pulling it out from under her and then pulling it up and over their heads, creating a dark, love nest for the two of them. He tugged her against him, holding her in his arms as the sun came up outside the closed curtains in all its spectacular beauty. "Mine," he whispered hoarsely, before closing his eyes and going to sleep.
Neither had any clue what would happen to them when the sun set. If they had, they may not have slept so contentedly in each others arms.
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Across town, a man who wasn't quite a man roamed his study, staring at the tiny lights that lit up an electronic board on the wall. He smiled when he saw the green light slowly change to orange and he took a healthy drink of his finest brandy.
Both lights glowed an ominous looking orange to mix with the other orange lights that gleamed back at him.
"Two more down. Oh Nicky, I knew you wouldn't be able to resist her. She looks like an angel and now you've turned her into a devil." He laughed, swishing the brandy around in the bottom of his snifter. "Oh the fun we shall have. Good times ahead," he laughed. "Good times." He lifted his snifter into a silent toast to the board and then turned to make another circuit of his study.
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I love creepy villions and this one with his orange goop is really tickling my fancy. I hope you are still enjoying Hunter and Mirage. I know I threw in another couple, but it was necessary to add on to the plot line. Besides, it's kind of difficult to hate a vampire with a heart of gold and Nicky is a goodie. Take care and remember to vote and let me know what you think!
- COMMENTS
JuicyPeach72272over 11 years agoKeep going girl, your story is almost as addicting as fan-fucking-tastic sex!! LOL
meg_scorpio_85over 12 years agoI really do enjoy these stories. I've been reading through your stories and noticed that you like feedback. I just wanted to say that I think that you're doing a great job. I truly enjoy your work. Thanks for the entertainment.
Kyrlaover 13 years agoLove the story so far. Nicky and Arielle moved their relationship along pretty quickly, not a complaint, just an observation.
canndalmost 14 years agoI love Nicky! Him and Ariel are adorable. I just hope they aren't killed for having the orange goop in them. It was a relief when you finally brought Hunter and Mira together. Good stuff.
Anonymousover 14 years agoI've been wondering how Nicky had been able to resist feeding off of Arielle, with his increased hunger and all. Also their relationship is moving quite fast, does that have to do with the stuff they gave him? He's become one of those super-Vamps; now that they've done the deed, does that make her a super-Vamp, too? And what else happend to her, the end was rather ominous? Will he be able to save her, if needed?
I really love this story!!!
MissWizz
Anonymousover 14 years agoi like how just when i think i know what is happening you throw in a twist to send my mind rambling with conclusions but i dont know which one is correct. you are an amazing writer keep it up
LovelyDarkLullabyover 14 years agoSomething had to be up with Arielle there's no way a person would be that willing to give up their life like that for someone they just met, it's not even like they had a good conversation or anything. I bet she's in on it. Anyways, good chapter, hot scenes, awesome page turner. Keep it up.
cantfightfateover 14 years agoI'm more interested in Hunter and Mirage than Nick and Arielle right now, but I don't mind the addition of those characters. Looking forward to seeing how you pull it all together.
Anonymousover 14 years agoI'm glad that you are excited about this story. Hopefully that will mean chapters faster, because they are so hard to wait for when the story is this good.
