All Comments on 'Hunter Hunted Ch. 18'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yes!!

We are getting closer and closer to finishing off the bad-ass. Keep the updates coming =)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
aww man

I wanted you to keep going...I never tire of your stories...more please.

Meridian13Meridian13over 14 years ago
Brilliant as Usual

I never tire of your stories. Brilliant!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Loved It

Loved it. Can't wait for more. Keep up the great work.

GlosUKGlosUKover 14 years ago
Brilliant

Great. PJ xx

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 14 years ago
Gearing up for the end!

It's all looking good!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Oh yeah!

Keep 'em comin!!! ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
i'm hooked

this really good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

That was really good.

KyrlaKyrlaover 13 years ago

likedthestory-nextchapternow kthxbye

shortydowopshortydowopover 13 years ago
I am really trying, but...

Chapter 9 said: "The shot that splattered Myler's head all over Drake's face seemed to come from nowhere." So, how is Myler apart of Chapter 18? I have not read Chapter 19, but even if you some how explain how he is indestructible (not likely considering the "splattered" head and all...), it still does not explain Myler's appearance in this chapter. This story seems to have too much going on and not enough focus. Hopefully all of my questions will get answered in the next 2 chapters...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Incredible, I just can't stop reading this story, it's my third time absolutely love it

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