All Comments on 'Hunter Hunted Ch. 20'

Thank you for finishing this story! I was worried for a moment there that you would leave it at the last chapter which wouldnt be fair. I'm not ashamed to say I had a wee cry. Thankyou so much for that awesome story.

Have loved this story right from the very beginning, and have been waiting eagerly for every new chapter. can't wait for road to love, and to find out what happens to Callie & Shadow etc...

plz don't keep us waiting too long.

As ever DK, you have written a superb story. I love forward to the new story in due course. PJ xxxx

I loved it. Always enjoy happy endings. Can't wait for the new story line to begin. I am anxiously awaiting any and all new post. Because we all know whatever it is, it is going to great. Thanks so much for sharing. Keep up the great work.

I so can't wait for the new story. I really would have liked to have known what was going on with Nicky but I guess that will have to wait for another story. Have a happy and wonderful holiday season. Had give that new baby a great big kiss on Christmas. God Bless.

A bit of a tease to intro the next story when you won't be posting it for a while, but I'll get over it. Thanks for writing!

YESSSS!! SO glad that Mira wasnt gone forever. As always, I LOVED this series. Gotta see if I can buy Callie's Shadow and the story of Angel and Marcus too!

Thank you again for a wonderful story and for bringing together characters again from both worlds.

Happy New Year! I am looking forward to what else you will writing this coming year.

Loved this story!

Some minor details that would need some editing: Shadow said at some point that that orange stuff turned Vampires into Super-Vamps, Nick didn't even realize that; Dom was introduced as a succubus, and later turned into an incubus; Mira's and Hunter's eye colors changed throughout the story from green and blue to blue and gold, respectively, and back.

But I really loved the story as a whole... I'm becoming a big fan of ASP!

Question: is there something going on between Dianna and fur ball, or is that a seperate story?

Keep 'em coming!!!

MissWizz

Wow! That was a nice long, really good read! And thank you SOOO much or leaving it online long enough for me to finish all of it! I love your character developement, you give the friends different and enough personality that it isnt a tunnel story but has interest and twists and character. Thanks!

just finished the whole series in one long ass day. cant wait to read more about hunter and mira, tho i wonder how hunter's life span will fit in with mira's now that the curse is lifted. will she age like a normal human and hunter will have to live long after her death? hmm... i wonder...

Thanks DK, for the consuming spell-binding writing that we've all come to love. I can't wait to see what you do with these two and with Road to Love. Keep up the amazing work :)

This story was absolutely wonderful. It started off wonderful and ended up awesome. I enjoyed this story a lot. I'm just waiting for the rest of it to come. Great cliff hanger by the way. It will keep me anxious for the next part.

beautiful ending, esp between hunter and mira. look forward to seeing them in the next book.

That was so great. I am looking forward to the next book. I hope that it will be coming soon.

that was a woderful story and i just cant wait for the next one.

^_^

Is there a prequel to this story? I read the note at the beginning and thought that this must be the first one. What is next? I'd love to know the order, but I will try to figure it out even if I don't hear from you. I enjoyed this. The anger and hostility radiating from Mira at the beginning was a lot to take but I see how it was part of the character development. I didn't really enjoy the graphics of just what happened to her daughter, either. Overall, it was great. Now on to the next one...

I love your work. Now I really want to read what happens next, Thanks and Keep writing.

great stuff u'v got lol hope u keep them coming ur really good

Your stories are just absolutely awesome to read!! Love them!!!

Another great success. This book kept me reading until the very end and was one of the best I´v read to date. Thank you for giving me a chance to read it :-)

Bob

Had to wait to the end to leave a comment as i could not get to the end quick enough ....each chapter kept me hooked and wanting know what was to happen next. So sorry as i know that you like to have feedback - well it was just GREAT ! and i can't wait to read the next book - Hunter's family look like they have a few skeletons.......it should be a real mouse clicker, another tail to good to put down.....please don't keep us waiting....pretty please.!!!!!

Your work is fabulous! Please don't keep us waiting!

I am sorry that I waited till the end to comment I just couldn't stop reading long enough to leave a comment...This story is absolutely great!!!

And how much longer for the followup series? It's been over two and a half years. Please, PLEASE continue....

That's how good I think your story was!!! I especially loved the death of Braxton, that was the shit girl!!! You have an amazing talent and am so happy to hear that you have works that are getting published, because you deserve the success. Thank you for posting some of your works here on Lit for free and I wish you nothing but happiness & success in the future.

Steph

Absolutely Amazing!

I truly enjoyed reading your stories .... So sxciting ... Keep up the good work .... I freaken LOVED IT!!

PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING!!

You are spectacular

Well worth reading you can't put it down

...a treat. I couldn't "put it down," and now I'll be missing some sleep to get through tomorrow. You know it's a good read when it's worth THAT. Thank you. -R

Such a comfort to know you've written more, too. I'll be delving into that soon. Keep writing and dreaming up these characters!

Wow! I read for enjoyment and I enjoyed every chapter. Found two or three spelling errors but nothing to worry about.

....like Constantine, Grimm, and before these two, Dresden Files. ASP series rocks! Thanks for this great characters, plots, sex! Everything's awesome & you're a great storyteller.

One very terrific story.

This was so good! I couldn't stop reading this.

I love your stories, especially how they tie together. It would be great if you had a reading order / timeline list so they could be read in a natural progression.

This has been one of the best sagas I've ever read. Please keep posting them. I cannot get enough. Amazing work.

Love your writing, love your storylines, and have fallen in love with your characters!

Couldn't put it down. This is a great story. I mean, GREAT!!

Thanks

Any update on Road to love?