by Lycandope
Not much in the way of erotica, but the two main characters felt so real I couldn't stop reading. Bravo! Easily one of my favorite stories here.
Hello! Thank you very much for writing such a nice little "review"!
I'm not sure there will be another chapter but, I did leave it kind of open just in case. I have other stories to tell in the meantime but, who knows? Perhaps I'll come back to them. I enjoyed writing their dynamic, dialogue and their story!
A great story and a very enjoyable read. You are a good writer who knows how to tell a story with a good plot and excellent character development. I hope you will write a 2nd chapter to this story with further adventures of Heather and Teri. Will Teri change into what Heather has become since Haether bite her as she is showing some of the characteristic of the change, stronger, vision, and hearing changes. Retired Army NCO
this is a great start and I really hope you continue the story. Teri's insanity is just enough to blunt the edge of Heather's panic )