All Comments on 'Hunter's Moon'

Perfectly timed piece as intended. Not sure if you were whispering, but this piece was beautifully erotic/so romantic — mesmerizing. If you should decide to share more of Sophia and Militsa — wonderful, but it easily stands alone. Looking over the varied storylines and characters you’ve shared thus far, what a vivid imagination. Thanks. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Love this story, I know It's in the Halloween contest ,but do you plan to continue it

Excellent story and well-written. I enjoyed the emergence of the "traditional" vampire as compared with some of the more modern ones. I'd like to have seen Sophie avenging herself by feeding from Elizabeth but I suppose the latter's blood would be somewhat sour and bitter.

Incredibly erotic and beautiful wlw relationships built, I’ve never read from start to finish and edged myself perfectly to your climax , and it was an orgasm that just plain felt grounded in love , thank you and hope to keep reading more

Beautiful, very well written story. Love this and also your other work. Such a thoughtful and descriptive writer. Would be amazing to hear more of Sophia and Militsa's erotic journey.

Gracious thanks for the positive feedback.

Migbird, your comments are inspiration in themselves, many thanks for them.

The submitted story is abridged from the version I wished to submit but time constraints and the approaching deadline for the Halloween themed stories sadly forced me to cut a lot of what I intended to include. Its time may come though....

I have started a discussion thread in the forums to give somewhere to expand on questions etc so as not to turn the comment section into a q and a.

https://forum.literotica.com/threads/shooting-the-moon-discussion-thread-for-my-stories.1575825/

Many thanks again.

Quite divine for a vampire story. Would have liked to know what happened to Sophia's family but a minor detail.

Wow!

This has to be one of my favourite stories that I've read in here. Thank you so much for this, the characters were amazing and your descriptive writing was incredible. I agree with the other comments, that a continuation of the two characters and more stories with them, would be brilliant to read :)

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I have to say, the comments I've received for this story are what makes it worthwhile. Thank you all.

I think we will be seeing more of Sophia and Militsa...

Well written. The characters were believable. Please write more about them!

That ending was cherry on top.

Such an original work, excellent quality with wonderful characters (poor Katharine!) and a terrific plot. I would be very pleased to see a sequel.

I'm not a vampire fic lover, but this was really well done. I tried to award it six stars, but for some reason, the system wouldn't let me.

Ah weell. Five stars will suffice.

Fine writing and a very sensual story.

This is such a great story and very well written. I would love to see this story continue. Thank you for sharing such an amazing story.

My heartfelt thanks to all of you that voted for Hunter's Moon and helped it to achieve 3rd place in the Halloween 2022 contest. I'm both surprised and extremely grateful for the support and encouragement.

Damn. This is awesome

Follow up congratulations on well deserved recognition for this piece in the Halloween Story Contest.

Looking forward to more of your vivid imagination.

Congratulations on the win. I struggled through your story, but I guess that vampire stuff really doesn't meet my tastes. I enjoyed the ending since the two of them were taking a vigilante stance, fighting evil as it were. But all of the sucking each others blood stuff was not entertaining for me at all.

I had no major issues with your writing. The usual typographical errors cropped up once or twice but they were minor and not distracting. I just didn't care for the subject matter even though I made an honest effort.

What a lovely, sensuous and romantic tale. I congratulate you - eat your heart out Stephenie Meyer!

This story was AWESOME!!! I am a fan of Gothic Horror and this was without a doubt one of the best horror and lesbian stories I have read in a long time. At first, I thought Sophia was alone and she had become separated from Militsa. I am glad I was in error. Glad to see they are still together.

Congratulations on winning. If your stories are as sublime as this one, I will relish their prose.

Take Care

Absolutely fantastic ....... Yeah definitely a winner in a contest ....... Love in a different sphere ...... But the reason this could be happen is as old as human beings are, greed and betrayal ....... Thats sad intelligence can not be the substitute love and trust is in need for

Ten hearts for your talented writing style 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝🌟🍀

I find the vampire myth (the modern one devoid of crosses, sunlight, and garlic) a very compelling concept.

For the perfect modern vampire story, read "Death Becomes Her" by Michael Anderle.

Your story here was very good, melding love, passion, fear, and reconciliation.

Very well done.

As a fan of Anne Rice's vampires, I enjoyed this a lot! I would gladly go on another adventure with these two...

WOW! Such beautiful imagery.

I will definitely check out more of your stories.

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Well written. Your style allows the reader to conjure their own vision of your characters.

Another wonderful story. That's three I've read in 24 hours. I must seem like a stalker. Number four will have wait - I really must do some work. Thank you for bringing such joy (and making me so horny). xxx KD

Yet another lovely story, so well-written.

The love transcends the physical.

Please continue the sequence with these two (more) altering reality.....