by i_would
I've seen the idea before but yours is the best telling so far. The swaps between perspectives are well executed too. Keep on writing, please!
Love this read as much as another of your story - No vacancy
Very hot, and sexy, and i love that twist in Frank from a nice guy to an 'adorable' bastard in the sex scene
- looking forward to the 2nd chapter soonest!
(im hoping there would be a part where tables are turned though; where the hunter becomes the hunted *evil laugh*)
... you have very little writing ability and obviously have no interest in Proof Reading!
In fact I was very surprised to see how many 'stories' you'd written!
I thought that this was your very first attempt!
Still, it might get better when you've spent a few more years in school!