by Enithermon
i'll join in with "What ..the..hell?"
was really glad to see an update, really hope we don't have to wait this long for the next one.
I'd almost lost hope for another chapter... but as always, you pulled through with flying colors. I am absolutely in love with this story, and can't wait to read the next installment no matter how long we have to wait :)
is satisfyingly long and full of action... but there's always a cliffhanger and always a long wait. It's a bit torturous. I wouldn't mind shorter chapters more frequently. But beggars can't be choosers, so I'll take whatever I can get :) Thanks for writing.
Just wanted to let you know that I *love* this series! And I'm so excited to see what happens next: who is this Breton and what connection do she and Ina share? When does Ina figure out what's really going on between her and Feric (or if she gets told, who tells her)? And of course, I'm sure we're all eagerly awaiting the baddie's comeuppance and subsequent smackdown.
Thanks for all the hard work you put into this one, and 'Fire' too.
Glad to see another chapter the wait has been killing me! hope to see Aina catch Ina and Feric that would be funny!
keep writing. the stories are great. i much prefer this storyline over the fire one
That just cracked me up so bad! I really like this story. Nice balance between the sex and action. It makes me kinda bored sometimes to read a story with sex and nothing else but I guess I shouldn't complain since this is literotica, but please keep writing. I enjoy your stories very much.