All Comments on 'Hunting the Hunters Ch. 01'

Good storyline. Pathetic grammar. 'Buckle' instead of 'buck'.

'Mary wondered what did he mean'. It's 'what he meant'. Get an editor or just switch to writing in your first language. I'm assuming English is not it.

So hot. Please more

Can't wait until next chapter!

I liked it and can't wait for the next chapter

I love it! Hot as hell itself!

For once the vampire isn't a sex crazed slut or super-stud! Amazing!

As much as the rest of the vampire definition here is modern movie cliche, the not interested in sex makes up for a lot.

Thank you for sharing your work!