All Comments on 'Hurt Me, Please'

Scary. Brutal. Loving.

Something to appeal to the dark side in all of us.

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TarnishedPenny chose the right words: scary, brutal, and loving. Terrific writing

I love the pounding linearity, the single purpose and the depth this story goes to get there. Wonderful story!

The need to hurt the one you love is every bit as strong as the need to feel the pain. I enjoyed that element of the story very much. Ive tried a few time to describe how it makes me feel, and I've tried many times to understand why I enjoy it so much. I know it increases my sense of ownership; knowing she wont leave even though I'm beating her. But I also would never hurt her in a way she didn't enjoy, and that is also critical to my enjoyment of it. So do I really own her, or does she own me? Circular references dont compute. But I still love hitting her. And she loves my hitting her. And this story; I loved this story.

Wow...

I could feel the tension and intensity all the way through. Lucky lady she is.

Don't stop writing.

Just lovely.

Wonderful writing. Lovely tension. Very, very well done.

a nice hot little story. Whose needs and wants are stronger. As they both add that fuel to the fire called lust. love the descriptions of such depraved acts. Would love to see further adventures of these two.

Beautiful story! I love being hurt only more severely at times. Nothing, is ever outside my limits.

Woah!!! Major intense, but a major turn on!!! I gotta get deeper into your library of work… you are awesome!!