All Comments on 'Husband's Best Friend - Pt. 01'

Ignore the Puritans!!! Very hot, keep it going!!!

Ok, not a bad start. If you make this into something where the husband likes his wife cheating on him with his best friend, I'm out. I would already throw her out and kick the crap out of my 'best' friend.

Wow... very tough/strained situation. It really caught my attention. 5 stars for creativity (and a hope in seeing how you "resolve" the situation.) But the next chapter... I don't know. Really, Tim didn't notice the cheating couple when he came in and fell unconscious in the chair? Ok fine - can happen. But honestly, I'm afraid that this is just another story of a "happy-go-cucky" man who is just average in size, too nice (not a Dom but, rather, a loving partner), can't satisfy his wife properly (has she bothered mentioned this to him - probably not), and gets turned on watching his gorgeous wife get sexually pleased by the sexually charismatic, hung friend who is a sexual maestro. I hope that's not part of the story arc.

This is a good one! 5 stars. Can't wait to see where this goes.

a story of uncontrollable lust and passion. It leaves me wondering if the author is the hot blooded 'loyal' wife. Well done!

I loved it. Part 2 please

There is a cuck tag so thank you for that. I will pass on the rest as I just see a cheating wife getting what she wants and the husband allowing all she wants. However, you do write well.

Such a loyal wife and best friend. Just tells you what a great society we live in. Good thing this just a story because it would be a good comedy

Rob is his "best friend". He is a piece of shit. It's bad enough that he has already shagged his friends wife but to accept a room under his roof and then betray him further makes him the worst type of man there can be.

The actual writing is good and I hope the husband finds out and gets rid of them both. They deserve each other.

I assume this is heading towards a fairly standard husband finds out hes a cuckold story which is perfectly fine it's a solid and well written start to that story line, But I did enjoy the dynamic of sex scene between Tim and Becca, maybe you could so this as a best of both worlds story with Becca enjoying herself with Rob while also using his presence to train Tim into the more aggressive lover that she needs to give her the orgasms she deserves.

Only an idiot would tell an author to ignore comments. This cry baby should be ignored. Idiot.

Oh no, not another unfinished story!

You realise that your average time between chapters is now above 3 days?

fox in the henhouse

A great start to a story. I can tell from your writing that she is torn and wants her husband and his friend. I can't wait to see how she deals with this and what comes next.

Thank you for the feedback thus far, I appreciate it. I have subsequent chapters pending submission approval to be published, so hopefully won't be too much longer!

It is 12 days now (and 4 days after your statement about pending submission).

Would you as a reader really like to read a story which is stretched over such a long time?

I don’t.

Before reading pt 1 I should of checked to see if there was a part 2.

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I think your story is awesome!