All Comments on 'Hyperactive Testes Disorder Pt. 01'

Good idea, but you should read your work before you post. Several issues in the story that spellchecker wouldn’t pick up that a read-through would have. Stuff like that is distracting. Thanks for sharing.

Thanks for the feedback. I do read through my stories, but it's hard to proofread your own work. You have a tendency to read what you meant to write, instead of what you actually wrote.

Very promising first chapter - I like the unusual premise and the characters. Good writing, too. Looking forward to future chapters.

Thanks. The next chapter is up now if you were interested where it goes.

Great series!

It's definitely my most popular series so far.

It's Tourette syndrome, not turrets. Google stuff you don't know.