All Comments on 'Hypno Sister Ch. 01'

,,, until you had her call you master. There was no need for that and I just simply refuse to read trash like that.

I don't know what Enterprise's problem is. Maybe he didn't realize he was reading a story in the mind control category? In any case, this is a very enjoyable story and promising series.

A bit too fast-paced, but very good descriptions. And I find these sort of stories more compelling if the protagonist is having more of a moral dilemma. It would also tease the audience more. I really like the fact that you noted the bra sizes, it bugs me when erotica doesn't do that at any point.

I like it but I hope you update Nintendo town next with a new ch.

Very HOT!!!! It would have been even hotter If he got his sister pregnant!

Yes very hot hope there is a chapter 2. Should of had grace get naked too, but maybe next time. I kind of believe for the way the start of the start goes, mom may have been hypnotized too..

This is a good story, not great but good. Would like to see a few more chapters.

Can't wait for the next part

It’s begging for a Ch. 2!! The obligatory lesbian action Carrie & Grace have. Maybe a blow bang for the girls; in another town of course. Lots of potential here.

No sequel???