by VilHaMer
That was an awesome story! Fucking mom and mind control/hypnosis are two of my hot buttons and this story really fit the bill! I loved how it got turned around and she ended up being hypnotized! Five stars and a favorite point!
fuck it was rlly well written and so fucking hot i was jerking off so hard while my sis was sleeping and fuckkkk i just came all over her panty clad pussy ππ i hope she's on the pill
This is only your first story and this is how you come outta the gate? This was fuckin' dope. Definitely looking forward to more of your stories
Now this story stands alone, she really went
off the deep end. Looks like she made him
the boss, and not her. Good story, well written.
..THANKS..
USAF
Please continue the story it's a great start would be a great novel
please continue this is so good ;) would be hot if he is still helpfull around the house being a good boy ;) then flips a switch and manhandles his mom making her be his slut for a while ;)
Does "mom" have a sister that needs a strong man (post-divorce?)?
Will "mom" continue to hypnotize her son to be the alpha male she needs?
You started it... we want more!
Well told, and logically developed. Hope this is not the end -- suppose Danny gets Sara to put, one by one, her more attractive lady clients into a compulsive-compliance mood in respect to her suggestions, and then brings them home, one by one, for Danny to screw their asses off, while his mom gets her own rocks off helping her son cum again and again? It's worth a thought! Thanx for the great Read, one of the most original I have read in years.
Very exciting.
Easy read and plausible.
Super fucking hot stuff.
Congratulations on good writing.
Hope to come across more from you.
Now I'm going to go taste my beautiful wife's pussy and make her explode on my face, then fuck the hell out of her from behind, whilst she's on all fours wondering what turned me into an animalπ€£π€£
If I told her the truth afterwards she'd be pretty bloody disappointed as the thought of incest is abhorrent to her.
But she'll certainly appreciate the outcome as she a sex machine 100%..."whatever you want, wherever you want it as often as you wish it" she always says.
Gotta go now....and thank you for my nights starter packπππππ
Boy, did mom create a monster that's going to fucker her raw? Danny sure went from a loving son to a controlling sadistic mother fucker.
A really hot read. You know, a lotta people don't usually like this dark kind of material in the Incest section, but you managed to make it a really fun read. My only disappointment was that Son didn't turn his kinky mommy into a three-hole fuck toy. But that's just me.
Well done
Excellent story, well written. Thank you; five stars more if they were available.
That was so hot,my sister and I read it while we played with each other,then we both cum so hard
Did you move to Norway from an English-speaking country, because your English is fantastic! HypoDad and HypoMom are both extremely-well written, and I'm glad that I am following you. Please write more when time allows! Cheers!
@PervertedKnight: Thanks very much. :) No, I live and work in Norway, it's just that I've practiced a lot. My English isn't perfect, I guess, but I do take pride in building a text as grammatically correct and well-flowing as I can.
Loved it,
You had my panties wet after the second chapter, was dripping mess at the end.
Please keek writing.
@Horndog77: Thanks for your feedback. This story is done, but there are more coming in the future. :)
I think the ending was a little too harsh All respect for his mother out the window! Apart from that a great story.