All Comments on 'HypnoMom'

by VilHaMer

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 4 years ago

That was an awesome story! Fucking mom and mind control/hypnosis are two of my hot buttons and this story really fit the bill! I loved how it got turned around and she ended up being hypnotized! Five stars and a favorite point!

LtrockhardLtrockhardabout 4 years ago
Amazing

No words,you nailed it!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Absolutely amazing. Loved it. Please keep up the good work.

rugrat77rugrat77about 4 years ago

Amazing story! Awesome ending! Keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I splattered cum all over my sisters pussy

fuck it was rlly well written and so fucking hot i was jerking off so hard while my sis was sleeping and fuckkkk i just came all over her panty clad pussy πŸ’€πŸ’€ i hope she's on the pill

49WIZARD8849WIZARD88about 4 years ago

This is only your first story and this is how you come outta the gate? This was fuckin' dope. Definitely looking forward to more of your stories

ROCKY70ROCKY70about 4 years ago
W O W !!!!!!!!!. ^*!^*!^*!

Now this story stands alone, she really went

off the deep end. Looks like she made him

the boss, and not her. Good story, well written.

..THANKS..

USAF

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Please have her get her tubes untied

And have him get her pregnant!

gem4tnagem4tnaabout 4 years ago
More please

Please continue the story it's a great start would be a great novel

HragsHragsabout 4 years ago

Great story...need more !!!!

mannchaamannchaaabout 4 years ago
Please continue ;)

please continue this is so good ;) would be hot if he is still helpfull around the house being a good boy ;) then flips a switch and manhandles his mom making her be his slut for a while ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
There has to be more...!

Does "mom" have a sister that needs a strong man (post-divorce?)?

Will "mom" continue to hypnotize her son to be the alpha male she needs?

You started it... we want more!

VilHaMerVilHaMeralmost 4 years agoAuthor
Many thanks...

Thanks for all the nice comments. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great Imaginative Story!

Well told, and logically developed. Hope this is not the end -- suppose Danny gets Sara to put, one by one, her more attractive lady clients into a compulsive-compliance mood in respect to her suggestions, and then brings them home, one by one, for Danny to screw their asses off, while his mom gets her own rocks off helping her son cum again and again? It's worth a thought! Thanx for the great Read, one of the most original I have read in years.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Definitely Nailed It!

Very exciting.

Easy read and plausible.

Super fucking hot stuff.

Congratulations on good writing.

Hope to come across more from you.

Now I'm going to go taste my beautiful wife's pussy and make her explode on my face, then fuck the hell out of her from behind, whilst she's on all fours wondering what turned me into an animal🀣🀣

If I told her the truth afterwards she'd be pretty bloody disappointed as the thought of incest is abhorrent to her.

But she'll certainly appreciate the outcome as she a sex machine 100%..."whatever you want, wherever you want it as often as you wish it" she always says.

Gotta go now....and thank you for my nights starter pack😊😊😍😊😊

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 3 years ago
Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde

Boy, did mom create a monster that's going to fucker her raw? Danny sure went from a loving son to a controlling sadistic mother fucker.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Enjoyed it!

A really hot read. You know, a lotta people don't usually like this dark kind of material in the Incest section, but you managed to make it a really fun read. My only disappointment was that Son didn't turn his kinky mommy into a three-hole fuck toy. But that's just me.

Well done

ScoratScoratalmost 3 years ago

Ummm wow. Oh my. Daaaamm that was hot. What else can I say.

newporter56newporter56over 2 years ago

Very hot story, loved it.

bumblegrumbumblegrumover 2 years ago

Excellent story, well written. Thank you; five stars more if they were available.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Would love to see if he takes all 3 holes. GREAT story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

That was so hot,my sister and I read it while we played with each other,then we both cum so hard

TawdrydadTawdrydadalmost 2 years ago

Excellent pacing, very nice build up and pay off

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

So much potential, so immature implimentation .

Bill S.

PervertedKnightPervertedKnight9 months ago

Did you move to Norway from an English-speaking country, because your English is fantastic! HypoDad and HypoMom are both extremely-well written, and I'm glad that I am following you. Please write more when time allows! Cheers!

VilHaMerVilHaMer9 months agoAuthor

@PervertedKnight: Thanks very much. :) No, I live and work in Norway, it's just that I've practiced a lot. My English isn't perfect, I guess, but I do take pride in building a text as grammatically correct and well-flowing as I can.

4Leather4Leather8 months ago

Loved it,

You had my panties wet after the second chapter, was dripping mess at the end.

Please keek writing.

VilHaMerVilHaMer8 months agoAuthor

@4Leather: Thanks, glad you liked it. :)

Horndog77Horndog778 months ago

Perfect. Had me hard early on. Another chapter if you could please.

VilHaMerVilHaMer8 months agoAuthor

@Horndog77: Thanks for your feedback. This story is done, but there are more coming in the future. :)

blackcockriderblackcockrider7 months ago

Hot mommy story, thanks.πŸ˜‹

VilHaMerVilHaMer7 months agoAuthor

@@Horndog77: Thanks. Glad it worked for you. :)

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I think the ending was a little too harsh All respect for his mother out the window! Apart from that a great story.

Rob_RoyaleRob_Royale5 months ago

Terrific stuff! Loved this.

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I have been writing erotic stories for many years, but mostly in Norwegian. Recently, I started playing with the idea of writing in English, and thought I could publish them on Literotica in addition to my own Tumblr blog: https://vilhamer.tumblr.com/archive