by magmaman
You wrote a story that could have been humor, loving wives, or mind control.
Thank you for the entertainment. Mike from Texas
As the other poster noted, this was a very nice cross-genre story, satisfying in all of them. I was also pleased with the plot - too many MC stories end up screwing the husband too (in the not-so-much-fun sort of way.)
I have become a fan of your work, and am always happy to see a new pice appear. Thanks so much for sharing it with all of us. Aloha!
TH in Ausfahrt, Germany
MMM,
You nailed it. Great story line and character development.
xtremedd
It's been a long while since I've seen a MC story not screw over the husband, let alone the hypnotist getting paid back for his mischievous behaviour.
Great job on a nice, refreshing change.
just shows how people can be manipulated by these hypnotists.....quite frightening....would never go near the shows when they came to college as always got the women to do naughty things....so glad he got beaten up...I would have lamed him for life......shows that true love conquers all.....loved it....
Good story. Disheartening to see a perfect woman defiled. But, all ends up well.