All Comments on 'Hypnotizing the Family'

Enjoyed your story immensely, well written and constructed beautifully. Lots of pleasure for everyone except Dad maybe. Might be an idea to give him a bit of spice as a reward. This storyline could run forever, please write some more. Well Done !

I enjoyed your story! It was a great read! I hope that future chapters include mom getting some lesbian action & dad gets a little action too!

Please don't wait to long to bring us the next chapter(s).

kinda feel for the dad he was only a workaholic he should at least get him someone to love on sometimes

I liked the story line very much a few mispells but not bad and i do.admire your other works as well

You've got a great start for a long running series. but here's something for you to consider - how will the main Character handle all this power? Will it corrupt or will he rise above it.

Good story well told, but as a very experienced and well-liked writer it would be beneficial to try and catch the odd typing glitches before submitting.

what a great start can't wait to see how many more adventures he can get up to. many I hope

Bravo! Can't want for more!

Very enjoyable! It reminded me a lot of SexyBeast's "Surprising Seduction".

One of my new favorites. Needs more with the mother and the sister together with the son. That teacher definitely sounds promising though!

Looking forward to more chapters. You should do more hypnosis themed stories you are very good at it.

Bravo, great and thrilling story. Hope there is a sequel

Fuck me, that was FUCKING AWESOME

For once I thoroughly enjoyed a man making his mom, father and sister plus friend be his slaves. Must have a sequel. Brilliant

I can't WAIT to see what comes next!

PLEASE may we have some more???

What a way to go Cammie. More please, much more.

I loved this. I thought that as much as his sister tried to humiliate him he would try and get some payback. But getting her to service him sexually is somewhat humiliating, but not if she "enjoys it". I was thinking more in the line of public humiliation at school or any of the hangouts that the school kids go to,

Again, I loved the story 4*****.

Would love another chapter of this story

Rather well written. There's a few run-on sentences that could do with some minor rewording and some punctuation; semicolons make great additions to related thoughts. I would love to read another chapter of this tale.

Yes, we need more chapters and let dad in on the fun. Banging his daughter & friend

I loved the unique angle on hypnosis. However, the time between the first and final hypnotism session felt very rushed. Things progressed too quickly. The sexiest part of this story, in my opinion, was this short paragraph:

Christine, her erect nipples outlined in her nightie and carrying a breakfast tray, knocked on Cameron's bedroom door. As he ate she explained her husband's concerns about work.

It's a shame that there wasn't more buildup to this. The 3 women literally jumped from normal, to wearing hot outfits, to being semi-nude around the house. The story would have benefited greatly by having more teasing scenes as Cameron gets his mom and sister to slowly lose their inhibitions to wearing revealing outfits around him. Perhaps a section on him getting them to stop wearing bras around the house (for their own comfort, of course).

Also, Cameron never said in any of the hypnosis sessions that they would desire him sexually, yet the story had them suddenly lusting after him. All he said was, "Your purpose is to please me, obey me, serve me, to anticipate and satisfy all my needs and desires." While sex could be assumed to be included in the above command, the women aren't mind readers. Plus, it would be incest for two of them to assume he meant that, so some specific instructions to get past that would also have been welcome.

The pacing seemed off, and we readers didn't even get to enjoy a scene of Cameron banging his sister. Seemed like you skipped the "reader foreplay" by leaving out some middle scenes as I mentioned earlier. Take this all as constructive criticism, as I mention it with only the best of intentions.

All in all an excellent first hypnosis story!

for taking the time to write. There was a lot of good stuff in your feedback that I will keep in mind for future stories.

I hope you add another/more chapter(s) 1: letting Russ in on the fun and 2) Exploring the teacher's treatments

This story ticked a number of my kink boxes: 1. Mom/son, 2. Brother/sister, 3. Mind control, 4. Cuckolding dad, 5. Mother/daughter. A second and even longer followup chapter would be awesome!

The many spelling and grammar mistakes distracted from the fluidity of the story. Proof-read before submitting, please.

But it would have been much better if edited. The number of typos and punctuation mistakes really detracted from a very good story. For your own sake, either spell check or get a volunteer editor before you upload.

good story but what about knocking up robin and his sister and more on the teacher.

Really good story line but, you need to keep the story going. A few more chapters starting with the teacher, then I think adding more women along with Cameron expanding everything into his working life.

...can you please continue your foray into hypnotism ?

You really are a good story-teller.

Please keep writing - Thank YOU !!

Awesome story please make a chapter 2. I'd love to see how he gets this redheaded teacher.

I hope you make secound ch

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Good work. Well thought out. Minor grammatical errors but as a whole, a very good, sexy story. Keep it up. You are a natural at this.

StockingKing

An author willing to acknowledge reality: " the air was thick with the pungent scent of sweat and pussy" following several sexual encounters. Thank you. Maybe some of those who are authors and those who are simply writers choose to ignore it will read your stories and recognize how an author uses reality and not ignore it when writing a story.

You left it open at the End. with the Red Headed teacher coming over. You should write another Chapter . and let us find out where his Harem is by Now.

maybe he should tell his sister Julie and her friend Robin, if he has't already, to stop taking birth control, Then, if he and Robin married and had twins girl, well...XJQCu

This was one hell of a story, you have got to read it to belive it .Funny at times but a very good story. Thanks good read.

that acknowledge this fact when two or more engage in sexual activity.

the air was thick with the pungent scent of sweat and pussy;

Too many writers ignore this fact, having several people engaging in sexual activity just prior to parents or others entering the room and not even commenting on the smell of sex in the room.

Fabulous read!! You have to write another chapter! You left a great opening

This could easily mark the ultimate daydream of any hot blooded teenage boy, with a kinky streak!

Well done. I really enjoyed your story.

Please tell me your going to continue on with this story..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

PLEAE ONE MORE CHAPTER, DOEST EVEN NEED NEW CHARACTER! I just want to see him toy with them more

One of my favorites! I appreciate the storyline and that there were'nt huge gaps in the story logic. I would love to see a continuation. After immediate theres always aunts and cousins, and then there friends, and there friends, and etc...

Loved the writing and concept. This riveting story-line could absolutely be gently expanded into a series with minimum supporting characters to an erotic saga of the core group.

When you finish writing more chapters for some of your other great stories, if you are well enough could you write another chapter for this story pretty please.

I am sick of reading it every month. Please delete so I can get on to other stories!!!

Good story, well written. Well done.

Excellent story! I do wish there was more to it as like everyone else. I would love to hear as he is the sole male lover in the family, Cameron gets all three of the women in his family pregnant as there has been no mention of birth control.

When is the next chapter due? I can't hold my breath for too much longer!

LeB.

Yes yes yes.... Omg this is hot.... loved it.....

LOL great but let Dad have some pussy too

great story 5*

echoing others, this is worthy of some followup

After a slow sTART, IT FINALLY GOT GOING. The premise of women being totally subjected to a man through hypnosis is a little out of left field, unless the women really want to be sexual slaves.

Its a shame this didn't get continued

Been waiting 2years additional chapters. How about dad Getting some of the action?