All Comments on 'I Always Wanted To Be A Cop Ch. 02'

I thoroughly enjoyed reading both Chapters. This one is easily worth 5 stars as well. Thank you for sharing.

No TEN STARS for Both Chapters

Re-read that part again. Rick was at home mourning the death of his wife and daughter and doing all the thing necessary to move on with his personal life. When he went into the station to talk with Stan it was the first time he was able to focus on what was happening in the investigation.

Loved your story.

maybe.

Great story and well told. You evoked emotions and hit close by on a couple occasions. Thank you

Rick, I enjoyed this story. One of your best.

Yeah my prediction was correct. Okay what is next?

It should be in non-erotic. Aside from that it was good. It could have been great if there were more to it.

It seems that some think that even in the romance cat.that it's required to be filled with monkey fucking to be there.Remember what the cat. is,if you are wanting strictly hardcore constant fucking go to some of the other cat's.Romance is more than wall to wall sex.But then some will bitch if they are hung with a new rope,so what can you do.

Well written, though a little disjointed at times. The story line remained gripping, and it was a pleasure to read. Not all romance has to have sex, indeed some seem to think that sex equals romance. Keep up the good work.

When they filed the charges against Washington, it should have been 4 counts of murder instead of 3. You stated that his first wife was Pregnant when she was murdered.

The author has a style designed to put you to sleep. I'll remember that when I have trouble sleeping some night.

Those who can do, those who can not become critics.

You did a wonderful job with this story. I hope you have more like it.

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

BEAUTIFUL STORY :)

Your story hit a home run. Thanks.

thankyou......

very much

So sorry Rick is not writing anymore.

Ouch. There are so many ways to critique a story without being snarky. Overcritical just doesn’t seem to know how. I, for one, think he/she should be banned.

Another great story from a good writer, apparently the author has elected not to write any further at least on this sight. Such a shame as GatorRick in my book is an excellent writer and gets my 5 star vote for this sad by wonderful tale.

Gator Rick: Romantic Superb

Great read! If you like relatively short positive Romance stories, try his. Just wish there were more!

Wonderful conclusion to your story!

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